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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: Paige, The Muggle Hermione | Date: 2003-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 61673 | Chapter: 1 |
briteyes,
Wonderful topic for an intreaguing wondering story! I had always mentally debated over what those wonderful sweets our dear site is named after would be like. I think you've captured the Creeveys very well; Dennis, in particular. Their confusion about eating habits is quite in character, for their hyper-active, Pig-like at times, behavioral patterns. Superb job!
Paige, The Muggle Hermione |
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| Reviewer: Jessanndi | Date: 2003-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 27021 | Chapter: 1 |
A really nice piece, you've found an angle that I wouldn't even of thought about. Why should they know what to do. I like to reference to seaside rock it places them firmly in a Muggle upbringing without slapping us in the face with it.
Great Stuff. |
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| Reviewer: googligoo | Date: 2003-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 26968 | Chapter: 1 |
omigod! this is cute! it's pretty funny, how dennis and colin are trying figure out how to eat them! really, reading this makes my mouth drool. i luv sugar.
keep on writing!
googligoo |
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| Reviewer: Richard | Date: 2003-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 26951 | Chapter: 1 |
I really admire people who can write an effective one-shot. This is a fun bit of verite - the brother's voices are great - as hyper and breathless as the real thing! Of course, I shudder to think of what those two would be like on a sugar high!
good job |
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| Reviewer: Milldred Lembert | Date: 2002-09-23 |
| Reviewid: 4595 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've never taken the time to review before, but this story was just to good! I'm glad someone finally wrote a really good story about the Creeveys. They're some of my favorite characters. I was laughing so hard. You brought up a really good point, too! |
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| Reviewer: Manu | Date: 2002-07-31 |
| Reviewid: 471 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh! It's like a missing scene! How wonderful! I ADORE missing moments with all my heart. And I love this! I've always had a soft spot for Dennis (Colin's always annoyed me, but he's cute, too. =P), and this was just TOO cute. I luff it. Luff it, luff it. |
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