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Review(s): 92
| Reviewer: Nikki | Date: 2005-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 127517 | Chapter: 1 |
"I can't believe you'd do that to us, Wormtail.
Sorry, Wormtail. We should have known."
That was good. |
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| Reviewer: Accent | Date: 2005-06-21 |
| Reviewid: 124688 | Chapter: 1 |
| WOW!This was wonderful!I like the last part about the changing of the map....it was really sad but very well-written! |
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| Reviewer: bingbang | Date: 2005-03-19 |
| Reviewid: 116991 | Chapter: 1 |
| i like the idea of Harry using the map to talk with the marauders....i'm just not sure if he'd be able to tell about the future and change the map like that at the end |
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| Reviewer: Tabitha H. | Date: 2005-03-18 |
| Reviewid: 116873 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hm... odd. Yet, interesting. Not the best but not the worst. Intriging idea though. |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2005-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 115972 | Chapter: 1 |
| Amazing. Could have done with an explination, or a beginning, but if this were THAT perfect I'd be worshipping it. Loved it. Cracked up the whole way. No words to describe it. (Well, I know you just wrote it, but still...) |
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| Reviewer: Sakula Trelease | Date: 2005-02-11 |
| Reviewid: 113624 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's very..... well I've never read any thing like it. I'm at a loss for words. Don't know if that's good or not though. |
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| Reviewer: Brad | Date: 2004-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 98847 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was a very clever idea. I've always been intrigued with the notion of multiple instances of a persona existing simultaneously in the Potter universe, particularly after Dumbledore used portraits to such an effect in OotP. Never thought about the Marauder's Map in such a context though. Very nice. Thanks. |
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| Reviewer: guest | Date: 2004-07-27 |
| Reviewid: 94268 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was AWESOME! I felt bad for wormtail though! were they mad at him? By the way, is this a one chapter thing, or is this a series? if it is a series, WRITE MORE SOON! if it's not then it should be! |
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| Reviewer: Clover | Date: 2004-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 93220 | Chapter: 1 |
| OMG, that was SO sad! i was in tears by the end of it (as u can tell i'm a emotanl person), but really. I...i'm spechless. |
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| Reviewer: Silvia | Date: 2004-06-23 |
| Reviewid: 88386 | Chapter: 1 |
I like the idea of using the map and the marauders are just fabulous.
Poor Harry doesn't get any decent lines though - he's just stuck explaining things and crying. It'd be nice to see him just talking to the others about regular stuff.
Also, Wormtail hadn't betrayed them yet, probably didn't even know that he would, so it really wasn't fair to kill off his parchment version. But, I do have to admit, it's nice to see him gone. |
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| Reviewer: Ashton Fitch | Date: 2004-04-19 |
| Reviewid: 79554 | Chapter: 1 |
| ^.^ that's a GREAT story! lol it was kinda cute at the beginning especially, but I loved it at the end when they took out Wormtail! *stabs evil Wormy* ^.^ Write another one! |
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| Reviewer: Gyakutenno | Date: 2004-03-29 |
| Reviewid: 76198 | Chapter: 1 |
| I don't much like the idea of them _getting_ poor ol' Peter. It's... not right. Kinda funny in a dark way, to imagine ink sketches of them all fighting and tying Peter up. Wonder why Harry's never actually thought of using the Map like this, though? |
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| Reviewer: Bethany | Date: 2004-02-26 |
| Reviewid: 72238 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a wierd story! Harry seemed way out of character, so the fic wasn't very realistic. it also got a bit confusing sometimes, because it was difficult to work out who was saying what. |
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| Reviewer: stef | Date: 2004-01-25 |
| Reviewid: 68409 | Chapter: 1 |
| this story is really good... ive always wanted to find out what the other three marauders would think of wormtail if they found out what he'd do/done and this story kinda puts that in... well done and keep writing... |
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| Reviewer: Megan | Date: 2004-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 67528 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ahh... I'm sorry, but this is a really STUPID story. I didn't get 2 lines before I quit. And from about the 10 or 11 reviews I've read, I think they're just being nice, because this story SUCKS. |
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| Reviewer: WoLfPaWs | Date: 2004-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 66603 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow, that was really good...I mean, I would have like the thought of the Marauder's map being somewhat alive and that the inventors of those maps have placed their essence into the map...[hail marauders and to hell with wormtail]...it was really sweet as well, to have Harry talk to his father in the map[at least he get to hear his father's voice^_^...it's better than not knowing]...great job! |
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| Reviewer: Harmoine Greger | Date: 2004-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 66452 | Chapter: 1 |
| I do not get wat do you maen with every think that you said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
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| Reviewer: stone | Date: 2003-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 62525 | Chapter: 1 |
| I don't like how you made Harry out like a wuss. I see Harry as a strong person and not one to cry easly. |
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| Reviewer: Maddy | Date: 2003-11-26 |
| Reviewid: 60853 | Chapter: 1 |
| I think this is a sort of copy...lol! but i mean it has got a point harry could contact his father through this map! i bet he never thought of that! |
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| Reviewer: Myster web | Date: 2003-11-17 |
| Reviewid: 60432 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh dear, looks like Wormtail just got wiped. Bye bye virus! This was great, please write more! |
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| Reviewer: Alexandra | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48287 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hey, I'd never have thought of that, but it can happen, after all Snape did it in thrd year... I don't know if the final part was supposed to be funny, but I thought it was! |
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| Reviewer: Kara | Date: 2003-07-29 |
| Reviewid: 44518 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ha ha ha! Boy, that was blunt and melo-dramatic, but the ending was priceless! lOl! Great! |
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| Reviewer: Alex | Date: 2003-07-15 |
| Reviewid: 41941 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh, this is genius! and i love the nickname for lily! and the changed map at the end. hell, i love it all! |
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| Reviewer: jessa | Date: 2003-04-21 |
| Reviewid: 28937 | Chapter: 1 |
Can they do that?? Kick Wormtail out? That was very interesting... I need to read more um.. MPP stories. :p That was wonderful.
Gosh, I have so many questions... what made Harry talk to his father through the map? Ok, I only have that question. I suppose we'll never know... Or maybe we will. |
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| Reviewer: Fidelius Femmela | Date: 2003-02-17 |
| Reviewid: 20711 | Chapter: 1 |
amazing! this is a wonderful idea for a story, but i do have one gripe: it's far too short! you could make a series of it, or something... i love this: *are you serious? no, you're sir- oops* awesome! i love it; you really should write more.
~FF |
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| Reviewer: Angiesphinx! | Date: 2002-11-21 |
| Reviewid: 9756 | Chapter: 1 |
hi!!! well this a pretty good story, i liked it! i wish harry could talk with the marauders really.
what a shame! but the story is brilliant! |
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| Reviewer: Maia | Date: 2002-10-27 |
| Reviewid: 7165 | Chapter: 1 |
| hee hee! lol that was funny...especially at the end where it goes 'moony, padfoot, and prongs' |
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| Reviewer: C-Mage | Date: 2002-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 6527 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's an interesting fic...Harry contacting the Mauraders through the Map. And somehow I never thought of the idea. But the ending...it's great. MPP all ganging up on W, then the map changing to it's normal page.... It's kind of sad, though, in a way, how Harry has to explain it all to them, when they don't know anything about what happened to them. But still, nicely written! ~ C-Mage |
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| Reviewer: Georgia Russell | Date: 2002-10-11 |
| Reviewid: 5950 | Chapter: 1 |
| I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! Unique concept. good tempo and emotion. too bad it stands on it's own. guess I'll have to see what else you have written. Something more, I hope. |
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| Reviewer: Werrf | Date: 2002-09-09 |
| Reviewid: 3567 | Chapter: 1 |
| Beautiful and sad, wonderful and terrible. I'm very, very impressed. A beutifully appropriate ending, too. |
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| Reviewer: Aurianna Parker | Date: 2002-08-06 |
| Reviewid: 1147 | Chapter: 1 |
| I alway love reading fic where Harry meets the Marauders through the Map! The last bit ('MOONY, PADFOOT, and PRONGS...) is very touching. |
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| Reviewer: Cynthia | Date: 2002-07-31 |
| Reviewid: 443 | Chapter: 1 |
| Haha!! That was sad and hilarious at the same time!! lol!! You should do another like that! :) |
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| Reviewer: Anjerla | Date: 2002-07-30 |
| Reviewid: 355 | Chapter: 1 |
| ehehehe...okay that's mean but he deserves it. *laughs in Wormtail's face* It's about time...HA! |
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