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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Trapped
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: PussyKatDate: 2003-09-28
Reviewid: 54674Chapter: 1
Beautiful.Amazing. Wonderful. Perfect.
Blessed Be,
PK

Reviewer: Aaron AndronicusDate: 2003-02-01
Reviewid: 18615Chapter: 1
Not a bad poem. I like the way you only gradually let on the location that this poem describes. And your writing flows through the rhyme scheme rather than being interrupted by it, which is good. Thank you.

Reviewer: EilanDate: 2003-02-01
Reviewid: 18593Chapter: 1
Hi Helen,

this is amazing. Especiall since English isn't your first language, is it? The rythm and rhime pattern is constant (this sounds wrong, but you know what I mean) and the story it tells is... stunning.

Sorry for the incoherent review.

This is amazing.

Eilan

Reviewer: Persephone_KoreDate: 2002-09-14
Reviewid: 3930Chapter: 1
I rather think I've seen this before... maybe ff.net or your own site. It's impressive, very rhythmic... reminds me of some of Tolkien's pieces, somehow....

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