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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: *Ginny* | Date: 2003-05-27 |
| Reviewid: 33916 | Chapter: 1 |
| *Ron. He is so stressed. U write him as stressed very well. U almost feel stressed right along w/ him. Ouch, for Ron.* |
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| Reviewer: sean pembroke | Date: 2003-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 16499 | Chapter: 1 |
i like the voices inside of ron's head, there funny. the story is great. the characters are a little um how do i say this w/o hurting your feelings..... fake? i mean seriously everyone just going about their business thats definetly not like them, but, its your story and you can do as you please.....
i like the voices inside of ron's head ... their funny.
(please dont take the crit. literally. i liked the story!!!:)) |
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| Reviewer: Vels | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14880 | Chapter: 1 |
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Ashby | Date: 2002-11-17 |
| Reviewid: 9426 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, how sad. Poor Ron. No one seems to pay much attention to how *he* feels, do they? I hope you plan on adding to this, because it was wonderful. Your writing's terrific, and you really characterized the Weasleys well. Especially Ron. Great job!
~Ashby |
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