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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: percival | Date: 2003-03-11 |
| Reviewid: 23627 | Chapter: 3 |
I really, really liked parts one and three. I wasn't so sure about part two - it makes a lot of sense,
but sounds a bit too much like an American cop show to me. Jake turned quite a bit in Part three, all soupy
and subservient.
I liked your hint at Dudley's redemption - I guess he realised that Harry risked his life for him.
However, I'd disagree with the 15-year-old "child" - I'd classify him as a teenager. |
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| Reviewer: Madeline Elster | Date: 2003-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 18210 | Chapter: 3 |
Aww! Poor Harry! Well, not poor Harry. He gets to live with the Weasleys, now, doesn’t he?
I enjoyed your story a lot, if only for the characters. As I’ve said repeatedly, the Dursleys were great, and I loved Julian, and the Aurors were all wonderful. You also did a good job with capturing atmosphere, the way you created that tinge of fear in chapter one, that hectic environment in chapter three, and a feeling of, er… Resolution, or new beginnings, I think, in chapter three. :) Anyway, I really stink at this reviewing thing so can I just say “good job” and call it a day? ;)
God Bless,
Madeline |
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| Reviewer: Madeline Elster | Date: 2003-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 18204 | Chapter: 2 |
Your OCs are interesting, especially Julian (I’m a sucker for rookie cops), but still, I loved the Dursleys more. Poor Petunia! You wrote her hysteria very well. :)
God Bless,
Madeline |
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| Reviewer: Madeline Elster | Date: 2003-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 18200 | Chapter: 1 |
Great start! To be honest the vaccination bit sounded too much like a set-up, but otherwise everything else, especially the build-up of suspense, was pretty good. I really liked Vernon and Petunia’s little argument at the beginning and Dudley playing tricks (‘hem, TRIX) in the train. :)
God Bless,
Madeline |
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| Reviewer: Angiesphinx! | Date: 2002-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 14422 | Chapter: 3 |
i'm sure harry will be more comfortable in the burrow than at the dursleys'.
nice job!!! |
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| Reviewer: Lourdes | Date: 2002-12-13 |
| Reviewid: 12444 | Chapter: 3 |
| How wonderful that you thought of this fanfic. At last, Harry will be living with folks who truly love him. More, please? |
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| Reviewer: Shay Fountain | Date: 2002-11-20 |
| Reviewid: 9616 | Chapter: 3 |
| I must have read this story about 10 times and each time I like it more. I read a lot of HP stories, gen, het, slash, short, long and in between, but I just realized that this story along with about 3 more, all much longer, are my favorites. Wish there could be more of this Harry. Sorry for not reviewing earlier. |
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| Reviewer: Valerie | Date: 2002-08-07 |
| Reviewid: 1242 | Chapter: 3 |
| I really liked that! Sounds like Dudley started to like Harry in the end. Poor Harry. I think in just about every fan fic he desperately needs a hug. Sorry for my rambling, I get WAY too emotional over fictional characters :P |
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