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Review(s): 48
| Reviewer: anna | Date: 2005-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 134721 | Chapter: 1 |
This is a really well hought out and beautifully described piece. i could almost feel the kiss mself!
perfect characters. you wrote them almost as well as miss rowling herself! |
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| Reviewer: leslie | Date: 2005-06-17 |
| Reviewid: 124372 | Chapter: 1 |
| i love this its so cute this line is kind of cheesy: "If you want to do something…" She whispered. "Then have the strength to do it. I won’t hold it against you." |
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| Reviewer: Vanessa | Date: 2005-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 112259 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. This fic is amazing. When I read the bit about Ron kissing Hermione, the last time, I was blown away. You described it so well and got a few 'Aw's out of me. Very well done! |
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| Reviewer: A Lurking Reviewer | Date: 2005-01-17 |
| Reviewid: 111213 | Chapter: 1 |
I have to say that I couldn't stand the way Hermione and Ron acted. I can't believe that Hermione would actually say "At least I get to have my own things." to Ron. It's so cruel, and even it were to happen, I don't think Ron would respond by practically sexually assaulting her, which is what it read like. To me, they were acting OOC and the subsequent fluffy romance felt rather contrived.
However, I loved how Ginny and Harry are just "It's about time." :) |
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| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2005-01-09 |
| Reviewid: 110299 | Chapter: 1 |
Ahhhh how cute!! I love Ron/Hermione stories :D. Nice work, I liked it. I wish I was Hermione *pout*
*Geena Waters* |
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| Reviewer: pearls | Date: 2004-08-24 |
| Reviewid: 98438 | Chapter: 1 |
I loved every moment of it...the first kiss was so *sighs*....
gr8 stroy hope it'll happen like this in the future book lol
Peace out. |
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| Reviewer: Endicott | Date: 2004-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 95902 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love fics were he grabs her and kisses her in the middle of a fight great story it was really well done |
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| Reviewer: yoga | Date: 2004-07-08 |
| Reviewid: 91412 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was really good but i dont think that ron or hermione would ever sink so low as to insult eachother's families. just a thought. |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89100 | Chapter: 1 |
I don't think Ron and Hermione would insult each other like that. Those insults were way below the belt. Adn I don't think Hermione would insult Ron's family, no matter how mad she was at them. She *likes* them, for their own sakes. And if she did I don't think Ginny would be so happy about it.
That aside, there were some very good things about this fic. I liked Harry's resigned attitude to their constant fighting, and Ron's "I had my head up my Malfoy" made me laugh. Although I found some parts a little implausible this was a nice try, and I think you have the capability to go far as a Fan fic writer. Don't give up! |
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| Reviewer: Miranda | Date: 2004-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 78998 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love your story!!!!!! It has an Awesome take on Ron & hermoine's relationship ! Polease write more!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Roxanne | Date: 2004-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 66069 | Chapter: 1 |
| Thats a really good story i really enjoyes it! You have alot of talent as a writer so write more! |
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| Reviewer: dragontac | Date: 2003-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 53809 | Chapter: 1 |
| lol!! but the whole finger business is a bit confusing.. you only use the middle finger, right? have i been doing it wrong all along?? NOOOO!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2003-08-30 |
| Reviewid: 49409 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really enjoyed it... The bit at the begining with Ron kissing Hermoine out of the blue was a bit confuzing at first... but it came together nicly at the end. Speeking of ends, your ending was fantasic... keep it up |
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| Reviewer: Angiesphinx! | Date: 2003-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 43009 | Chapter: 1 |
why can't Jo put kisses like this instead of wet harry's kisses with cho?
a really qt story!!!
nice |
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| Reviewer: April | Date: 2003-07-11 |
| Reviewid: 41462 | Chapter: 1 |
| I liked this. I kind of found it by accident and thought, "This looks nice 'n' fluffy." Me readie, me likie! Yay yay! Kudos to you! Peace out, ma homie. |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2003-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 38734 | Chapter: 1 |
Ok, I just read this for the second time and I love it. It's so... wonderful. I dont know how to express. It truely is great.
Katie |
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| Reviewer: narcissa | Date: 2003-05-28 |
| Reviewid: 34059 | Chapter: 1 |
| ok forgive me for being a loser, but what exactly was the two-fingered gesture? and btw, ur story's really cute! |
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| Reviewer: Orla O'Shea | Date: 2003-03-08 |
| Reviewid: 23294 | Chapter: 1 |
| I thought this story was really good and I'm a huge Ron/Hermione fan. I liked the end especially when Ron stuck up his fingers because it reminds me a bit of me and my brother! |
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| Reviewer: G | Date: 2003-01-29 |
| Reviewid: 18261 | Chapter: 1 |
| How cute are they? FINALLY! ;) Love it, love it, love it... Well done! Thanks for sharing! |
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| Reviewer: Clair | Date: 2002-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 10916 | Chapter: 1 |
aaaawwwwwwww that's so sweet! very very cute, ron and hermione belong together for ever and ever and ever!! mwahahaha!
-Clair, |
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| Reviewer: Tori | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9946 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was wayyy too cute! I loved it! I'm one of the biggest R/Hr shippers there is,a nd this story is perfect to convince me even more! I wonder if JKR would include it in canon... ;-) |
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| Reviewer: amers | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9870 | Chapter: 1 |
| ahh! that was so sweet! you were really good! btw ron and hermione are my fave ship!!! |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2002-11-05 |
| Reviewid: 8138 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was...a little..overwelming. i didnt suspect THAT was coming. geez, you really know how to suprise a person. but, in a good way o' course. peace. |
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