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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Jealousy
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: muffin_blondDate: 2005-05-16
Reviewid: 122181Chapter: 1
Cool. I've never thought of that happening. Anyway. Nice story. I like your writing style. It's simple but not too much and it's really well written.

Reviewer: AquaineDate: 2003-08-03
Reviewid: 45147Chapter: 1
I did NOT like it it was horrible + i DO know better so there!

Reviewer: MrRobertsIIIDate: 2002-09-27
Reviewid: 4855Chapter: 1
Cute. First fic I've read with the mermaid painting taking a role - very original.

Reviewer: The Monkey That Learned To TypeDate: 2002-09-27
Reviewid: 4846Chapter: 1
This was a very well-written story from an interesting perspective. Good job.

I only have one problem with it: How did Myrtle know that Harry was going to be there that night? As far as I know, Harry told no one except Ron, who waited outside the portrait hole to open it for him.

Toodles,

~The Amazingly Intelligent Monkey~

Reviewer: pubDate: 2002-09-27
Reviewid: 4839Chapter: 1
Very good story!

Reviewer: LeeDate: 2002-09-27
Reviewid: 4836Chapter: 1
Ooooh! Very original! I liked how Aquaine was fascinated by tears, it gives her character an interesting twist. Myrtle may envy Aquaine's beauty, but Aquaine envies Myrtle's ability to cry. I liked the last line too, it makes for a neat and tidy endingand brings the story full circle. Nice job!

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