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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: muffin_blond | Date: 2005-05-16 |
| Reviewid: 122181 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cool. I've never thought of that happening. Anyway. Nice story. I like your writing style. It's simple but not too much and it's really well written. |
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| Reviewer: MrRobertsIII | Date: 2002-09-27 |
| Reviewid: 4855 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute. First fic I've read with the mermaid painting taking a role - very original. |
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| Reviewer: The Monkey That Learned To Type | Date: 2002-09-27 |
| Reviewid: 4846 | Chapter: 1 |
This was a very well-written story from an interesting perspective. Good job.
I only have one problem with it: How did Myrtle know that Harry was going to be there that night? As far as I know, Harry told no one except Ron, who waited outside the portrait hole to open it for him.
Toodles,
~The Amazingly Intelligent Monkey~ |
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| Reviewer: Lee | Date: 2002-09-27 |
| Reviewid: 4836 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooooh! Very original! I liked how Aquaine was fascinated by tears, it gives her character an interesting twist. Myrtle may envy Aquaine's beauty, but Aquaine envies Myrtle's ability to cry. I liked the last line too, it makes for a neat and tidy endingand brings the story full circle. Nice job! |
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