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Review(s): 22
| Reviewer: Felis Familiarus rule!!!!!!!!! | Date: 2004-07-31 |
| Reviewid: 94862 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very Good. Interesting. write a sequel or somethin' that was way too freakin' short!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Kiyoshi Phoenix | Date: 2004-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 89756 | Chapter: 1 |
| So cute! Love the talk with Bill, he's like the best brother ever. So fuluffy... Gotta love it |
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| Reviewer: Are | Date: 2004-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 78584 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so funny and sweet and wonderful! I love it sooo much. It's cute. Bill's perfect, just the older brother type. |
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| Reviewer: Are | Date: 2004-03-02 |
| Reviewid: 72893 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so good! Bill is the perfect older bro. He teases some, but not too much, and is just perfect! Ron and Hermione, too! Excellent work! |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr | Date: 2003-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 39095 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear Author,
This story was relitively well written but I think it included a little too much R/H fluff. One thing I think was that it wavered a bit from the original Ron/ Hermione characters. Ron would never have been so bold to tell Hermione straight out that he liked her. And Hermione would have definately not worn her PJ's down. She would have covered up with a bathrobe or something of that sort. Other than that, I think you write very well but you do need a bit more body to your story. I feel that it was a bit straight forward and simple, rather than detailed and deep.
From: Paige Knorr |
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| Reviewer: Savage Rose | Date: 2003-01-12 |
| Reviewid: 15986 | Chapter: 1 |
Hey--good job you! This is a short but very sweet take on a relationship that *everyone* knows is meant to be!
Also nice integration of Bill into the scene. Great job making a vignette type of thing! |
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| Reviewer: Maura | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14767 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was absolutely cute! I liked how they were talking while they were already kind of in a relationship as opposed to the usual talking before going into one. |
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| Reviewer: Invisibility | Date: 2002-12-31 |
| Reviewid: 14546 | Chapter: 1 |
| Fluffy. Nice and fluffy. Erm.. could be a good Chapter type thing if you want to extend it a bit more. |
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