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Review(s): 36
| Reviewer: Deadly_Secrets | Date: 2005-07-27 |
| Reviewid: 127987 | Chapter: 1 |
Awwwwwwwwww!!! R/Hr goodness!! I LOVED it!
[“Really? Never would’ve noticed.” Harry said it quietly so that Ron barely caught it.]
Hehe! Nice!
The song seemed perfect for this scenario... awww I love this song now... and whenever I hear it I'm going to think R/Hr! Hehe. Good work!! |
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| Reviewer: black cat | Date: 2004-10-10 |
| Reviewid: 100994 | Chapter: 1 |
| CUTE!!! very nice metaphorical use. PLEASE write another chapter. o btw very nice choice of song. fits perfectly |
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| Reviewer: de evil one | Date: 2004-10-10 |
| Reviewid: 100992 | Chapter: 1 |
| very nice for a fluffy story...down 2 earth, fits with the song and the book. write another chapter (that was not a question that was a command.);) |
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| Reviewer: Lauren | Date: 2004-07-05 |
| Reviewid: 90725 | Chapter: 1 |
OMG ... too cute! That is my FAVOURITE SONG EVER and it just sooooooo goes with Ron/Hermione ... dont ya think?
Aaaahh, great fic ... I loved it! x |
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| Reviewer: Kiyoshi Phoenix | Date: 2004-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 89225 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute! I love that song... and it does remind me of the way Ron feels for her, now to think of it. Cute... God, I love fluff. :D |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2004-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 77170 | Chapter: 1 |
Lovely. I love the way she keeps catching him staring. And Ron's self doubt. Very Ron.
But my favorite bit is the last line:
>>Ron squirmed uncomfortably, his face practically the color of the Hogwarts Express. After a second he looked at Harry with a disbelieving expression on his face and said, “You know what Harry? I reckon I’m crazy for that girl.”
“Really? Never would’ve noticed.” Harry said it quietly so that Ron barely caught it. Which was fine because he chose to ignore it anyway.<<
Well done!! |
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| Reviewer: story645 | Date: 2003-12-30 |
| Reviewid: 65203 | Chapter: 1 |
| good story, well written. thank you for leaving things to the readers imagination. did it have to be krum? in the books Ron does not bring up the topic, he only reacts when it comes up |
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| Reviewer: celestina black | Date: 2003-08-28 |
| Reviewid: 48995 | Chapter: 1 |
wh..... whatdhe say?
oh, and just beacuse i am a COMPLETE idiot, i ACTUALLY put the song on while i read this.
i do plan to do the same with your "meet virginia"
but, asides from that, v nice and sweet, and very realinstically in charachter |
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| Reviewer: butterbeer | Date: 2003-08-26 |
| Reviewid: 48653 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awww! So sweet. Very well written. Creative idea, relays the character's thoughts perfectly! Keep Writing!!! |
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| Reviewer: Emma | Date: 2003-07-04 |
| Reviewid: 40098 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awesome ff!!! Just one thing... What did Ron say to Hermione?? I'm DYING to know that!!! Keep it up .... I LOVE R/H fluff! |
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| Reviewer: Cat | Date: 2003-06-19 |
| Reviewid: 37707 | Chapter: 1 |
| awwww! That was just so cute! *tilts head to side and gets big, round, glassy eyes while awwwing* The song fits this fic PERFECTLY!!!Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2002-11-28 |
| Reviewid: 10481 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh, that was sooooooooooooooo clever! un belivebly wonderful beautiful way to end a admirationable lovable story! |
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| Reviewer: Anoriel | Date: 2002-10-10 |
| Reviewid: 5936 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ohhhh!! It was sooooo funny, just as I started reading this, this song came on my radio. It was almost spooky! ^^ Great story! |
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| Reviewer: Ozma | Date: 2002-10-07 |
| Reviewid: 5618 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwww! This is very sweet!! I love Ron and Hermione together, anyone can see that they're simply meant to be. (Anyone except for sweet, clueless Ron, that is.) I loved watching Ron FINALLY get a clue! |
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| Reviewer: samantha | Date: 2002-10-07 |
| Reviewid: 5579 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was cute, and your right--anything as long as its R/H. i like the song you chose, fit very well. the writing was precise and clean, and i give you 2 thumbs up!!!! |
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