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Review(s): 19
| Reviewer: Morag Camshron | Date: 2004-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 108229 | Chapter: 1 |
This is heartbreakingly beautiful, and the song lyrics really add something to it. I love the descriptive language that you use; even though this piece is a bit out of canon now that OotP is out (Ginny meeting Michael Corner at the ball) it's an enjoyable, well-written fic.
-Morag Camshron |
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| Reviewer: nikki | Date: 2003-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 54665 | Chapter: 1 |
| the story was very nice the poem parts were a great adition but dont you think it should be a longer story maybe have a sequal. harry was truely a great git for not noticeing ginny. the way you described her mad her sound real pretty and shes a really nice girl. |
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| Reviewer: nikki | Date: 2003-09-28 |
| Reviewid: 54664 | Chapter: 1 |
| the story was very nice the poem parts were a great adition but dont you think it shoul be a longer story maybe have a sequal. |
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| Reviewer: *Ginny* | Date: 2003-06-22 |
| Reviewid: 38307 | Chapter: 1 |
| *I love this song!!!!! I like Sarah Brightman's version, it's gorgeous. This is so sad, Harry really is a clueless bean. And no offense 2 Cho, but Y would he want the heck 2 go out w/ her?! It's based purely off her looks, he doesn't really know anything substantial about her, the gr8 dunderhead that he is! That made me so mad, I finished it this morning, Harry is a GIT!!!!! But he'll clear up soon, even Percy will, wont U, Perce!* |
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| Reviewer: Camilla Bloom | Date: 2002-10-09 |
| Reviewid: 5770 | Chapter: 1 |
This is a pearl! I love Ginny and I love that song, know it by heart; so (small remark, not even sure if it's correct) shouldn't that be 'When he dances he moves me to a smile'? But, never mind me, I uploaded with loads of bugs still hidden.
The characterizations were very good; liked that thing with Ron & Hermione always there in the background; and I do hope Ginny & Harry will be together, one day, JKR permitting. Neville & Hannah, lol, I gave them two kids & a Golden Retriever in a fic you don't want to read, but they seem good with each other don't they? Very well written! |
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| Reviewer: Trisha | Date: 2002-08-10 |
| Reviewid: 1553 | Chapter: 1 |
Very nice fic. This is very much how I think Ginny's evening would have gone-- she may not have been so concentrated on Harry or so emotional, but it was fairly accurate. Your writing style is wonderful, and the song was perfect.
*Trisha* |
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