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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Starlight
Review(s): 23

Reviewer: Hpgirl42095Date: 2006-02-21
Reviewid: 140123Chapter: 1
Aww..that's so sweet ! *blows into handkerchief*

Reviewer: aryehDate: 2005-05-31
Reviewid: 123117Chapter: 1
very well done, not the tear jerker i was expecting but well done none the less

Reviewer: alicia hollandDate: 2005-03-06
Reviewid: 115668Chapter: 1
awwwwwwww!!! that is so sad!!!! what a tear jerker!!!! keep writing!!!! great work!

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-02-10
Reviewid: 113355Chapter: 1
DAMN - I like your work

Reviewer: AliDate: 2004-07-20
Reviewid: 93223Chapter: 1
Wow. That's so touching.

I've loved all the stories that I have read by you.

Reviewer: readerDate: 2004-07-14
Reviewid: 92261Chapter: 1
that was sooOoOoOO good...it made me cry...it was really sad but cute...*sniff*sniff*...i am such a wuss

Reviewer: birdsongDate: 2004-06-13
Reviewid: 86951Chapter: 1
Oh, this was a tear jerker! It's a great story! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewer: AriDate: 2004-01-17
Reviewid: 67498Chapter: 1
Whoa, really sweet. I always had thought Sirius father liked Sirius a little more than his mum did. I loved Griffen and Sirius looking at the star together.

Reviewer: Kaikura TenshiDate: 2003-11-26
Reviewid: 60913Chapter: 1
Pretty good story. I can't imagine Death Eater supporting parents would be like Sirius's though, but if they weren't, that's how I'd imagine them. I also don't see Sirius anming his son Griffin, but I love the part where they're sitting on the roof, that was too cute, and I was about to cry....nice story!

~Kai =^_^=

Reviewer: mattyDate: 2003-11-26
Reviewid: 60794Chapter: 1
oh my god. *sniffles* that made me cry...that was soo cute. who was sirius' wife?

Reviewer: niiDate: 2003-11-15
Reviewid: 60108Chapter: 1
[sniffle]

Reviewer: krazigurl3991Date: 2003-09-22
Reviewid: 53964Chapter: 1
*sniff* *sniff*, that was so wonderful! WAAAAAHHH!!!!!

Reviewer: PicksleyDate: 2003-03-31
Reviewid: 25849Chapter: 1
Is this story influenced at all by this poem?

Starlight
by Philip Levine

My father stands in the warm evening
on the porch of my first house.
I am four years old and growing tired.
I see his head among the stars,
the glow of his cigarette, redder
than the summer moon riding
low over the old neighborhood. We
are alone, and he asks me if I am happy.
"Are you happy?" I cannot answer
I do not really understand the word,
and the voice, my father's voice, is not
his voice, but somehow thick and choked,
a voice I have not heard before, but
heard often since. He bends and passes
a thumb beneath each of my eyes.
The cigarette is gone, but I can smell
the tiredness that hangs on his breath.
He has found nothing, and he smiles
and holds my head with both his hands.
Then he lifts me to his shoulder,
and now I too am there among the stars,
as tall as he. Are you happy? I say.
He nods in answer, Yes! oh yes! oh yes!
And in that new voice he says nothing,
holding my head tight against his head,
his eyes closed up against the starlight,
as though those tiny blinking eyes
of light might find a tall, gaunt child
holding his child against the promises
of autumn, until the boy slept
never to waken in that world again.
Anyway, one heck of a story. I, too, need a tissue.

Reviewer: BethDate: 2003-03-28
Reviewid: 25505Chapter: 1
This story made me cry like a baby. Excellent writing. Thank you.

Reviewer: sarahDate: 2003-02-26
Reviewid: 22026Chapter: 1
Oh My God i'm crying!!!!!
This is so touching!

Reviewer: RainDate: 2003-02-08
Reviewid: 19538Chapter: 1
Oh my... that was great. Few fics make me want to run for tissue and this is one of them. I can actually imagine Sirius crying on the rooftop...

Reviewer: Padfoot is my fatherDate: 2003-02-06
Reviewid: 19239Chapter: 1
AAAAAAW... that was so good

Reviewer: KSDate: 2002-12-20
Reviewid: 13424Chapter: 1
Oh wow this one brought a tear to my eye, it was really sad. This story was great!

Reviewer: Teresina DragonwagonDate: 2002-11-22
Reviewid: 9798Chapter: 1
Oh...::sniffles:: Oh, that was good...I'm crying...wunnerful wunnerful job.

Reviewer: LourdesDate: 2002-10-27
Reviewid: 7156Chapter: 1
This is an excellent interlude. Wow!

Reviewer: LourdesDate: 2002-10-24
Reviewid: 6950Chapter: 1
This is really.....what can I say.....just peerrrrrrrrrrrfffffffeeeecccccct! Any more?

Reviewer: StormyfireDate: 2002-10-14
Reviewid: 6271Chapter: 1
You were right, that really was a tear-jerker. I'm off to find a tissue!!

Reviewer: skipastarseekerDate: 2002-10-06
Reviewid: 5508Chapter: 1
ok just make me cry i see how you are

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