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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Haunted
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-03-09
Reviewid: 115947Chapter: 1
sad

Reviewer: SilviaDate: 2004-06-23
Reviewid: 88391Chapter: 1
Ooh, very angsty. Poor Moony, all alone, and unable to come to terms. I liked the part where he lied to Snape, but how did Snape know it was a map? It's supposed to be a secret.

Reviewer: ShriyaDate: 2004-05-14
Reviewid: 82558Chapter: 1
wonderful. bit on the short side, but a perfect reminiscing fic, and just the right touch of angst as well. you didn't smother me, but i didn't end this fic feeling the same either. good job!

Reviewer: FernWithyDate: 2003-06-13
Reviewid: 36496Chapter: 1
What a great idea for a story! Of course the map would have a huge impact on poor Remus. A nice exploratin of what that impact woudl be.

Reviewer: HelenDate: 2003-06-08
Reviewid: 35869Chapter: 1
Wow. This story definately deserves another review.
Poor Lupin... I liked how he lied to Snape because he wasn't willing (able?) to completely let go.
I especially liked Snape's threat at the end. It's not enforced often enough which side Snape is actually on.
I'll even overlook the slight glitch that the map probably wouldn't have recognized Lupin at his magic (wouldn't it have recognized Snape right away if that were the case?) because that bit was so wonderfully poignant.
An excellent story.

Reviewer: Phillipa SommervilleDate: 2003-04-09
Reviewid: 27048Chapter: 1
Great IC story!

Reviewer: nadia pordmugDate: 2002-08-19
Reviewid: 2503Chapter: 1
I really enjoyed this story :) I like your style of writing and your characterisation of Lupin. The way Lupin decieved Snape about what he did with the map was one of my favourite parts, because it was so unexpected.

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