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| Reviewer: love/hate relationship | Date: 2005-05-21 |
| Reviewid: 122549 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love Ivan and Edina's relationship. It's so....tender and loving, and yet not completely sappy either. |
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| Reviewer: Newbia the Elf | Date: 2003-05-20 |
| Reviewid: 32913 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's sweet,but random.Normally I wouldn't like it,since it appears he has only loved her this summer,but it fits Ivans personality completely. |
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| Reviewer: Johanna | Date: 2003-04-11 |
| Reviewid: 27523 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh! ::hugs computer:: Oh! ::hugs it again:: Oh! ::is about to embrace the machine once more, then sees mother staring, so sighs contentedly instead::
That is the sweetest thing. It was so sweet and moving without being sappy at all -- well done! I'm glad Ivan told her the truth, even though she already knew. It was the right thing, because he needed to know that she loved him still. And then he proposed! I wasn't expecting that, and it was so lovely. ::sighs again::
Now I'm off to the sequel! |
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| Reviewer: niki | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14832 | Chapter: 1 |
I very rarely leave comments, in fact i never have before, but the fact that my oldest brother's name is Stefan and that he is currently 21 freaked me out enough to compell me to leave a review. I just wanted to say that your choice to write from alternate points of view was an effective one. I think that when people write from Harry's POV it takes a little from the story as no one can write it the same as JK; therefore hearing from others' POV's makes it seem almost part of canon because it seems reasonable that even if it were JK writing it would appear somewhat different. Thanks for writing from Viktor's POV . . . i hadn't previously run across that in my fanfic reading, nor even thought about it, though it will probably make me feel extremely cautious of boys feelings in the future.
As for Ivan, it's good to see other layers beneath his less-than-serious demeanor shown in "Moody Slavic Man." Keep up the good work! |
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