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Review(s): 20
| Reviewer: Cristina | Date: 2005-02-18 |
| Reviewid: 114286 | Chapter: 1 |
I've been wondering why they don't use pens at Hogwarts !
Very clever , very cool , write more ! |
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| Reviewer: Esther | Date: 2004-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 89142 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story was so adorable. I love when authors write about the "little things", what a cute idea. I could so see Flitwick going crazy over a pen and Neville too. I have to add that even though this story was quite short, you capture the characters and atmosphere really well. Good job. :D |
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| Reviewer: Jenn | Date: 2004-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 65381 | Chapter: 1 |
| Lol hehehe I love it! "As she shut the door behind her she swore she heard Dumbledore's voice say "Mine!"" hehehe that's hilarious! the thought of dumbledore being so happy over a pen... hehe i can definetely imagine it! |
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| Reviewer: L. Morningstar | Date: 2003-04-21 |
| Reviewid: 28875 | Chapter: 1 |
*dies of mad laughter* That was bloody hilarious.
"As she shut the door behind her she swore she heard Dumbledore's voice say "Mine!""
Priceless. |
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| Reviewer: Emily | Date: 2003-02-25 |
| Reviewid: 21928 | Chapter: 1 |
| lol! This is so funny. :) Sort of makes you wonder about the effects of muggle objects on wizards. |
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| Reviewer: Chambraigne | Date: 2002-11-20 |
| Reviewid: 9607 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is very funny and original. I just hope no one ever brings a stapler to Hogwarts. ;) |
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| Reviewer: StereoM | Date: 2002-08-27 |
| Reviewid: 3313 | Chapter: 1 |
That was different. LOL. <<As she shut the door behind her she swore she heard Dumbledore's voice say "Mine!">>
Hee! What an ending, and a great story overall. Very funny. |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2002-08-27 |
| Reviewid: 3311 | Chapter: 1 |
This was a lovely, fun, offbeat story! I'm glad it was recommended as a library fiction of the week.
Nicely done! Very fun!
Catherine |
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| Reviewer: Emma Dalrymple | Date: 2002-08-27 |
| Reviewid: 3296 | Chapter: 1 |
| Delightful story! I particularly liked: "Mr. Longbottom, I highly recommend that you give me the pen for your own safety." and "Hermione thought she had just given him a note that said Snape had transferred." Hehe. The ending was funny, too. Other than a few missing commas, it's a lovely little story =) |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2002-08-24 |
| Reviewid: 2977 | Chapter: 1 |
LOL! "mine, mine, mine" I can just see Prof. Flitwick fighting with Neville over an old, chewed pen.
This is a great reminder that wizards are different than Muggles (in ways beyond the obvious, of course!) ;)
I hope you write more like this! |
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| Reviewer: Yolanda | Date: 2002-08-23 |
| Reviewid: 2953 | Chapter: 1 |
| "Hermione thought she had just given him a note that said Snape had transferred." There's a classic line if I ever heard one. This is really funny and creative. I enjoyed it. |
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| Reviewer: Juliane | Date: 2002-08-23 |
| Reviewid: 2944 | Chapter: 1 |
>Hermione spent the remainder of her time looking up the rules for Hogwarts. She found no mention of pens not being allowed. Infuriating.
This is sooo Hermione,LOL!
>"I dissolved the Potions assignment, I don't remember anything about what is was."
…and this is sooo Neville, poor kid.
The vision of Flitwich and Neville wresting over a biro pen is hilarious. You have a wonderful gift for the understated, witty phrase that makes your fic absolutely sparkle.
>it matched his knuckles as he still grasped his pen.
Every little detail is better than the last!
I keep exlaiming ‘Ooh, great line!” and wanting to copy it into the review, but I’d end up copying your whole story. This is a wonderful piece from beginning to end, with a great characterization of Hermione, and a wonderful plot (how on earth did you think this up? It has a superbly loony premise). A true gem! |
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