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Review(s): 144
| Reviewer: Ardie Bea | Date: 2006-04-25 |
| Reviewid: 142232 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've just come back to reread this for the third time - the second time this month. Its fantastic. I love it. It's completely Ron, utterly Hermione and fantastically R/H. And I love, love, love the idea of..."Like he's laughing"!!!! Fluff? NO! One of the very best evocations of the reality of positive erotic love I've ever come across. Who wouldn't like to be kissed with laughter? So much more satisfying than swooning! |
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| Reviewer: dogstar_ebony | Date: 2006-04-24 |
| Reviewid: 142218 | Chapter: 1 |
| I don't know why but this story has stuck in my mind probably the most out of all the fanfics I've read, and I've read at least fifty of them...after I read it I kept randomly quoting bits back to myself, and had to read it again, and again, and again. I like your style - more please! |
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| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2006-02-06 |
| Reviewid: 139457 | Chapter: 1 |
I think this is wonderful. I like a good dose of well written fluff every once in a while (and well written fluff IS possible). You've achieved this quite admirably, I must add. Lovely!
~GW |
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| Reviewer: Autumnrosey | Date: 2005-09-15 |
| Reviewid: 132555 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very cute story. Wouldn't we all love a fella that kisses like that. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Emily Abitabile | Date: 2005-09-02 |
| Reviewid: 131509 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was brilliant but you need to right more on all your storys there all cut short and make them a bit more juicy. |
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| Reviewer: Luna | Date: 2005-07-12 |
| Reviewid: 126945 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aggg!!!! I reviewed this already but i just had to do it again! Its so god, really it is, my favorite snogfic. oh gosh! it just makes me moan with longing.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I love ron |
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| Reviewer: Sheridan | Date: 2005-06-20 |
| Reviewid: 124600 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aaaaaaaaaawwwww!!!! That was so sweet!! Nice and fluffy, just how I like them. You captured the love and romance between Hermione and Ron JUST perfectly. Nice work. |
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| Reviewer: lauren and mary | Date: 2005-05-23 |
| Reviewid: 122634 | Chapter: 1 |
omg that was so beautifuly sweet and...wow, that was amazing!-lauren
wow.....i wish i could kiss ron! lol jk but hermione is one lucky girl!!!!!!!! so sweet! |
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| Reviewer: Rose Williams | Date: 2005-05-04 |
| Reviewid: 121348 | Chapter: 1 |
| Sweet, in an almost over the top way, but also in a warm way. Gorgeous description, and Parvati and Lavender were fun. |
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| Reviewer: Silly Duckie | Date: 2005-03-12 |
| Reviewid: 116222 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it! I absolutely love it! I love the line "he kisses like he's laughing." That is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo great. |
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| Reviewer: Lila the Ice Cream Queen | Date: 2005-02-24 |
| Reviewid: 114797 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love fluff so much! This is quite possibly the fluffliest story I have ever read. I've read it about 10 times. I am soooooooo jealous of hermione! |
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| Reviewer: TimidRaven | Date: 2005-02-18 |
| Reviewid: 114278 | Chapter: 1 |
| *sigh* This fic just never get's old...i read it for the 1st time almost year and a half i ago and i'm *STILL* wicked jelous of Hermione. lol |
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| Reviewer: shayna | Date: 2005-02-02 |
| Reviewid: 112723 | Chapter: 1 |
that was way sweet! i feel like staying up tonight and reading all the lovely stories u've written...
that was so Ron! and so Hermione!
superb!! |
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| Reviewer: Ariana | Date: 2005-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 112663 | Chapter: 1 |
That was very fluffy but oh so wonderful. You felt it. You felt the joy in the kiss. It was sweet and very well written. Thank you.
(came by here by way of musesfool's live journal) |
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| Reviewer: Luna | Date: 2005-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 111823 | Chapter: 1 |
WAAAA!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! its so good i want to read it again and again untill i die, wish i knew a guy who could kiss like he was laughing.......
love,
miss Lovegood |
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| Reviewer: Teresa | Date: 2004-10-17 |
| Reviewid: 101691 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this fic, I absolutely love it. I am so very, very jealous of Hermione, though, just like every other girl in Gryffindor Tower. I like most how you complete the story--you didn't put "Hermione said" or "stated Ron," you just ended with a description-free dialogue and let us figure it out for ourselves. Well done, I enjoy all of your work! |
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| Reviewer: chaka | Date: 2004-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 96005 | Chapter: 1 |
Very cute story. I sort of like the way to gossip gets around and suddenly everyone just wants to know about it. However, my idea of Hermione doesn't include her sharing anything of that sort to girls who aren't *really* her friends, just people who she shares a dormitory with. But this isn't the first time my characterization clashes with somebody else's.
Also: Finnigan. Seamus Finnigan. Not Finnegan. I as in 'Irish'. Nitpicking, yes, maybe, but I've seen this a lot and it really bugs me. |
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| Reviewer: rockgoddess66 | Date: 2004-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 95302 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was a very cute and sweet story. Highly enjoyable to read and brought a huge smile to my face, depicting what Ron/Hermione are all about and how sweet they are. Thanks for sharing! |
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| Reviewer: onlylonely | Date: 2004-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 95188 | Chapter: 1 |
I'm wary of fluff because it's pretty cliched and sappy, but this one made me giddy and giggly. I didn't understand what Hermione meant at first either, but when it was explained... it made perfect sense. And it was icky or anything, it was just... sweet and romantic.
Heh, I'll never look at kisses the same way again. My favorite bit:"The worst thing about it, all the single girls (and many of those who weren't) moaned to themselves, was that Hermione had gotten Ron over a year ago, and she wasn't about to let him go any time soon."
I absolutely love your works. |
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| Reviewer: Zanna | Date: 2004-07-20 |
| Reviewid: 93213 | Chapter: 1 |
| Mosylu, thank you. I keep dropping back by to read this when I need a "pick me up" and it never fails to bring a smile to my face. JK may not have written these particular words, but you've managed to capture Ron and Hermione so perfectly that I have a hard time remembering this story isn't cannon that I just can't find in the books, lol! |
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| Reviewer: Gypsy Girl | Date: 2004-07-18 |
| Reviewid: 93030 | Chapter: 1 |
| wheeeeee! o, that was lots of fun. especially after reading Thing1's fic "Never Go Back" and almost crying. |
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| Reviewer: Lauren Elizabeth | Date: 2004-07-17 |
| Reviewid: 92863 | Chapter: 1 |
Good idea i like the last part when Ron and Hermione are talking!
~Lauren Elizabeth
Looney*Lauren |
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| Reviewer: SevenDiamonds | Date: 2004-07-05 |
| Reviewid: 90796 | Chapter: 1 |
A very nice piece of fluff. My only thoughts (and these are very, VERY minor unimportant nitpickish thoughts)? I would have liked to have seen the evolution of the rumour throughout the school. One instant it's Lavender/Parvati, and then the next, the whole school is trying to find out. If you ever revise, could you add something to flesh out the growth of the rumor? That'd be nice.
Good job overall. Nitpicks are nitpicks, and they do not detract from the nice, general fluffiness of the story. Well done :)
3.5*/5* |
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| Reviewer: istarwyn | Date: 2004-06-29 |
| Reviewid: 89293 | Chapter: 1 |
| i think i saw a story with this title somewhere else...oh well, likely the same one hey? still freakin' awesome! |
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| Reviewer: dragongirlG | Date: 2004-05-26 |
| Reviewid: 84634 | Chapter: 1 |
| Delightful fluffy suspense. I love the scene at the end...wow, did Hermione really make it all up? I think so! And then Ron...ah, no more speculation. This was really well-written. Delighful. |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2004-05-14 |
| Reviewid: 82567 | Chapter: 1 |
I do so enjoy this. I love the simplicity involved. And the duplicity of Hermione setting up the demonstration. And the reactions of the girls after seeing the kiss.
Just great! |
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| Reviewer: zutalors | Date: 2004-04-08 |
| Reviewid: 77714 | Chapter: 1 |
| This fic is so sweet, it could almost convince me to read het more often. :) I love what you've done here with this pairing, keeping it short and spontaneous and with just enough mystery to keep the reader's interest sparked. Needless to say, my fave line was- "He kisses," she said, "like he's laughing." |
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| Reviewer: story645 | Date: 2004-02-16 |
| Reviewid: 70928 | Chapter: 1 |
| Funny and sweet, and ultra fluffy. I like the last bit, about it being planned, it made the scene make sense. |
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| Reviewer: tisapaltrycap | Date: 2004-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 68675 | Chapter: 1 |
| this was nice. It was cute and sort of girly, but i liked it when ron and hermione talked in the end. |
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| Reviewer: GG | Date: 2003-11-28 |
| Reviewid: 61018 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cutest story! I don't know if i've commented on it before, but I absolutely love it. Like he's laughing...brilliant! Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Don | Date: 2003-11-13 |
| Reviewid: 59910 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is one of my favorite stories. Wait, it's one of yours so that's redundant! Truly, I just like the way Hermione is so smug about her relationship! And Ron, as usual is just clueless. Just great! |
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| Reviewer: Calliope | Date: 2003-11-12 |
| Reviewid: 59858 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, this was sweeeeeet! I loved it in all its fluffy glorious. Made me wish I was a smooching teen still. |
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| Reviewer: Kath | Date: 2003-10-13 |
| Reviewid: 56425 | Chapter: 1 |
| I am generally not a Ron/Hermione person, but AWW. I LOVE your Ron, he is done to perfection. |
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| Reviewer: DaNz-AnGeL | Date: 2003-10-05 |
| Reviewid: 55529 | Chapter: 1 |
| that is soooo sweet. like he's laughing...luv that!!! and i ALSO luved how u ended it. just so...perfect! *sigh* |
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| Reviewer: cel black | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50625 | Chapter: 1 |
*grins*
every time i read this...
every time...
*grins*
im fully agreeing with the mopey gryf girls.....
i want one!!
lol *grins some more, the bloody fool that she is* |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione) | Date: 2003-08-29 |
| Reviewid: 49202 | Chapter: 1 |
Author,
Great description. I've never been kissed so I can't relate too much to this but whatever. It was well written. I HATE R/H. DIE DIE DIE! Sorry, I'm a little freaked out right now. I'm fighting with my best freind halfway across Canada via email and I don't like R/H what so ever. Not a good combination. Not at all. Well I've got to go and stop my cat from licking my sock. Great story.
Paige Knorr |
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| Reviewer: Flamewing | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48285 | Chapter: 1 |
| Made ME laugh too. That was just...yes, radioactive levels of fluff. Very high-quality fluff, however...I just love this. |
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| Reviewer: Corvidae | Date: 2003-08-21 |
| Reviewid: 48130 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was so sweet...makes me think twice of the way i kiss(much too serious) i agree i want ron! |
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| Reviewer: *The Other Hermione* | Date: 2003-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 48015 | Chapter: 1 |
~*~ I put my homepage in instead of my email~*~
That was a brilliant description. 'he kissed like he was laughing.'
It was also brilliant how you explained it. How he looked like he was having the time of his life.
I just loved it and I will bookmark this so I can read it over and over. |
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| Reviewer: celestina black | Date: 2003-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 47068 | Chapter: 1 |
thanks for the A/N in the beginning- it was quite right.
radioactive indeed.
hee hee hee i liked it a lot
I WANN ABE KISSED LIKE LAUGHING!!!!!!!!
wah, 1:30 in the morn is a baaaaddd time for lovey fics..... :) |
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| Reviewer: abbers | Date: 2003-08-13 |
| Reviewid: 46896 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh ho ho i just can't stop laughing after this story! i am sorry if i am offending anybody, i don't mean to. i just can't stop laughing b/c this is exactly how everyone wants ron and hermione to be like! ohhhh... jo if you are reading this story you should add this to the 7th book or 6th book! |
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| Reviewer: line | Date: 2003-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 45715 | Chapter: 1 |
oh wow..
i just love this story..
write more...
'kisses like he is laughing..and never wants to stop'
so ... sweet.. hi hi |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2003-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 45628 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've read this story so many times! I love so much more each time I read it. It's perfect! |
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| Reviewer: dragontac | Date: 2003-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 45582 | Chapter: 1 |
| hahahah! good for parvati and lavender. i would have wacked them up the head if i were hermione |
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| Reviewer: Robin | Date: 2003-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 45040 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is probably the cutest story I have ever read. I can absoulutely imagine Hermione doing just that, and the description is so perfect--"He kisses like he's laughing." Oh, so perfect! Great job. |
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| Reviewer: Fi | Date: 2003-07-21 |
| Reviewid: 43192 | Chapter: 1 |
| *hearts* How utterly wonderful and sigh worthy that was!! *is jealous of Hermione and wants to be kissed by Ron badly* |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2003-07-17 |
| Reviewid: 42386 | Chapter: 1 |
| ::Sobbing:: that ::sob:: was ::sob:: one ::sob:: of ::sob:: the ::sob:: custest ::sob:: fluffs ::sob:: I ::sob:: ever ::sob:: read!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Elliott | Date: 2003-07-16 |
| Reviewid: 42294 | Chapter: 1 |
You do realize that I'm going to steal that description of yours. Yup. "Accio Metaphor!"
I highly suggest that you read the manga series "His and Her Circumstances" by Masami Tsuda: It will give you plot bunnies for Harry Potter and stories involving the Big Happy Weasely Family theory. |
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| Reviewer: Beth | Date: 2003-07-15 |
| Reviewid: 42191 | Chapter: 1 |
| Absolutely wonderful! I love it. I love that phrase. kissing like laughing. Ohh! I want to steal it and use it mercilessly. It is too perfect. You are a bloody genius if you came up with that on your own. |
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| Reviewer: Azyne | Date: 2003-07-15 |
| Reviewid: 42014 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, I loved this, I adore it to death! This is WONDERFULLY written, and super-fluffy, just the way I like it. Excellent! |
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| Reviewer: Stephanie | Date: 2003-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 41701 | Chapter: 1 |
| God bless u 4 that wonderful story. Lol. It was really good! 1 million thumbs up! i am definitaly gonna show my friends this story! lol! Keep writting! |
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