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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Sparky | Date: 2004-05-22 |
| Reviewid: 83993 | Chapter: 1 |
Very good writing, however some facts are a bit... untrue. For one thing (not to ruin the 5th book for people who haven't read it) the particular event involving Sirius at the end of the 5th book would render him unable to do anything for the Ministry. And he's been Harry's guardian for a long time, not since his 5th year. And a few more things, but I won't mention them here.
Ah well, a few untrue facts never hurt anyone, and your writing is excellent anyway, so, uh... yeah. |
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| Reviewer: Erin | Date: 2003-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 62410 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very well written! I liked all the Odyssey references although it took me until like halfway through the story to remember Charybdis. lol |
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| Reviewer: Angiesphinx! | Date: 2003-01-28 |
| Reviewid: 18097 | Chapter: 1 |
how qt!!!
this is a very nice story!!
congrats!!!
i read your 3 stories and they are brilliant! |
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| Reviewer: Lourdes | Date: 2002-12-13 |
| Reviewid: 12371 | Chapter: 1 |
| You wrote 3 short and wonderful stories that are complete on its own and together make one little novel. It is very good and please do not give up writing. |
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