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Review(s): 15
| Reviewer: Akele | Date: 2005-05-17 |
| Reviewid: 122217 | Chapter: 1 |
That was a great short story. I loved the ornaments. Gred and Forge, who went out with a BANG...haha!!
This made me smile.
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| Reviewer: hydraspit | Date: 2003-11-04 |
| Reviewid: 58724 | Chapter: 1 |
| Pretty. There is no other way to describe this fanfiction. And you made Fred and George born the same year as me!!! LOL!!! |
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| Reviewer: Sara | Date: 2003-08-01 |
| Reviewid: 44958 | Chapter: 1 |
Regarding your birth dates for Sirius and Lily: how do you figure? They shouldn't be nearing 50. It's been mentioned that Snape is 30ish somewhere between book one and book five (I'd look it up, but I don't much care. It's there.) Since he was in the same year as MWPP (and Lily), they'd be forty in 2004, tops.
Sorry. I know it seems like a petty thing to dwell on, but it ruined the fic for me. |
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| Reviewer: Charlotte | Date: 2002-12-19 |
| Reviewid: 13334 | Chapter: 1 |
| That's really lovely, a nice story to read at this time of year. I loved Hermione, you kept her character so close to canon, well done :) |
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| Reviewer: anna | Date: 2002-12-06 |
| Reviewid: 11522 | Chapter: 1 |
| Really good and I love the idea of the Gryffindor ornaments, but you messed up the dates. Harry had to be born before Lily died (1981) which is all well and good, but the twins are two years older than him and have their birth dates listed at 1984. Unless that's part of their pranks. |
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| Reviewer: pub | Date: 2002-09-30 |
| Reviewid: 5057 | Chapter: 1 |
Gred Weasley
2002 (but only just)
1984 - eternity
and
Forge Weasley
2002 (he went out with a BANG)
1984 - 1884
I know I reviewed this.. but it's worth more than one. Great story! |
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| Reviewer: Hermione @ Heart | Date: 2002-09-17 |
| Reviewid: 4152 | Chapter: 1 |
Awww! That was too sweet for me! Can't stop smiling! Loved it!
"What are you two doing?" Hermione repeated her question, arching an eyebrow.
"Reliving one of our favorite charms lessons of all time," Ron answered, with what he obviously thought was a winning grin. Hermione apparently didn't agree.
That was hilarious! All the characters were kept in line very well!
Congrats on a masterpiece! |
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| Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits | Date: 2002-07-30 |
| Reviewid: 365 | Chapter: 1 |
| ::sighs happily:: That's my feel-good story of the day. :) Yay for you! That was mahvelous. ~TPR |
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