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Reviews for: Blood On My Hands
Review(s): 43

Reviewer: EvilKythosDate: 2007-06-05
Reviewid: 148202Chapter: 1
Wow. That was--intense. There's no other word for it. I just stared at the screen for a while after reading this.
Brilliantly written, a bit creepy. You had me curious at the beginning about whose hands were bloody...

I don't generally like stories with sad endings, but for this I will make an exception. A bit macabre for my taste, but brilliant. My heart goes out for poor Hermione... And Malfoy. I never thought I'd say that. His last words were "Granger, you really are stupidů"

I never thought Hermione could ever be a murderer...

Reviewer: EmerikaDate: 2005-10-23
Reviewid: 135002Chapter: 1
Ok i think i got it. Hermione comes running in sees the green and hears the Avada Harry had really killed Voldemort. But she think Malfoy did it b/c Harry is lying there b/c of somehting i dont know. So hermione kills Malfoy then she sees harry is ok and then...Kills herself??

And Harry saw her kill herself.....Wow. Poor Harry

Poor Hermione

I can't believe im going to say this

Poor Malfoy

Reviewer: EmerikaDate: 2005-10-23
Reviewid: 135001Chapter: 1
Wow.Thats...Intense.

Reviewer: sejalDate: 2005-07-11
Reviewid: 126817Chapter: 1
wow...i sat here speechless for 3 minutes before i started writing this...this is jus...amazing...its remarkable...im in total awe...

Reviewer: anonymousDate: 2005-07-10
Reviewid: 126688Chapter: 1
wow. it was really eerie, but good. sad as well, but not scary, just upsetting. good job.

Reviewer: Miss GypsyDate: 2005-06-15
Reviewid: 124077Chapter: 1
Sick. That was sick. But it was also amazingly wonderful. I still am a tad bit confused, but I think I've got it after reading it twice. The last scene makes me want to cry.

Oh, poor Hermione.

And was it Ron screaming her name, finding her there?

This story broke my heart. You are an amazing writer.

~Miss Gypsy

Reviewer: LibbyDate: 2005-04-19
Reviewid: 120080Chapter: 1
Wow.. That was really incredible. I figured it out in the end. Very artfully written and powerful. Very good. :)

Reviewer: MaddyDate: 2005-03-13
Reviewid: 116447Chapter: 1
Okay, just read it for the 2nd time and I think I've got it, Harry kills Voldemort and is nearly dead himself becasue of the scar connection, Hermione doesn't realise he's still alive and thinks Draco double crossed them when actually he double crossed Voldemort, so she kills him with a sword, realises what she's done, then kills herself, am i right? This is a really chilling and very well written story to confuse so many people, myself included.

Reviewer: ElyannDate: 2005-03-13
Reviewid: 116433Chapter: 1
Wow, that was incredibly well written!!
So many feelings... It's overhelming!!
Wonderfull, great, very talented writting
I loved it
Not confusing, just very deep, very personal... I guess that's what I needed to read...
Thank you for such a gripping fic.

EPF

Reviewer: Vaguely ConfusedDate: 2004-12-16
Reviewid: 107881Chapter: 1
Yeesh, for a minute there I had thought that Malfoy and Harry had disguised themselves with Polyjuice Potion so that Harry could catch Voldemort with his guard down and Malfoy had gotten killed by accident and then Hermione had killed Harry. I like your version better, though. Although, I really must say, Hermione's extreme reaction to what she did seems a little, well, too extreme for her. An interesting idea, though.

Reviewer: NarumiDate: 2004-10-01
Reviewid: 100036Chapter: 1
dark. it gave me chills.

Reviewer: AbigailDate: 2004-09-19
Reviewid: 98749Chapter: 1
Oh...My...god...

I'm shaking. I'm crying. That was honestly the best fan-fiction I have ever read. I would go on...but I can't type anymore...that was amazing...

Reviewer: wicked girlDate: 2004-06-09
Reviewid: 86519Chapter: 1
omg. u are the only person hoo has made me cry. that was soo sad

Reviewer: Ginny777Date: 2004-05-26
Reviewid: 84562Chapter: 1
How very interestingly disturbing!!! You are a very good writer.

Reviewer: MeDate: 2004-04-25
Reviewid: 80053Chapter: 1
Okay, since a lot of ppl dont understand it, let me explain my interpretaion... simply...

Harry killed Voldemort w/ Draco's help, but Hermione didn't understand Draco was on their side and she killed him and i think she is really mad at herself so she tries to kill herself or something at the end...

Reviewer: MeDate: 2004-04-25
Reviewid: 80050Chapter: 1
Wow

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-03-03
Reviewid: 73062Chapter: 1
Disturbing. Disgustingly disturbing. Very well written, but I just can't like it. Sorry. I'm a Hermione fan.

Reviewer: amandahDate: 2004-02-15
Reviewid: 70837Chapter: 1
i didnt really understand who was talking and who she/he was talking to. who died? did harry or draco or voldemort? can u please email me and explain it to me.

Reviewer: story645Date: 2004-01-04
Reviewid: 65715Chapter: 1
heartbreaking, good use of pov

Reviewer: BetsyDate: 2003-12-31
Reviewid: 65293Chapter: 1
That was the saddest story I have ever read in my life. I really liked the twist, and I think it was brilliant. I think you should write more stories along these lines, wait maybe not. Just more stories with interesting twists.
-Betsy-

Reviewer: NarumiDate: 2003-12-17
Reviewid: 63693Chapter: 1
that was dark. and twisted. i like it. you've got such a knack for the unexpected!

Reviewer: EmmaDate: 2003-11-02
Reviewid: 58516Chapter: 1
Hello, this is me again. I read this thoroughly and I think I get it. Please e-mail me if this is right. This is what I think happened: Harry killed Voldemort. Hermione killed Draco, but Draco was good and on their side.

Reviewer: EmmaDate: 2003-09-15
Reviewid: 52696Chapter: 1
OH MY GOSH! This is the best fanfic ever read! BLOODY BRILLIANT! I only have 1 problem. I don't get who killed who and who is still alive. Please help!

Reviewer: jack!eDate: 2003-09-13
Reviewid: 52221Chapter: 1
omg! this is one of THE best fanfics i have read! it actually has meaning and depth. good job. your writing skills are amazing!

Reviewer: RebeccaDate: 2003-09-07
Reviewid: 51226Chapter: 1
omg....u wrote this so wonderfully....it is.....beyond words, wow....that's all i can say......wow

Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione)Date: 2003-09-06
Reviewid: 50958Chapter: 1
Dear Swirly Head,
Just a bit more, Poor Hermione.. a mistake, that's different... And Harry killing Voldemort... good. I'm scared but I love it. Thanks again.

Paige Knorr

Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione)Date: 2003-09-06
Reviewid: 50957Chapter: 1
Dear Swirly Head,
Scary. Terrifying. Thoughtful. Frightening. This fic terrifies me, amazes me and makes me see life differently... Blood... Sleeping... I'm shaking right now, literally. It's not that I'm a scardy cat, it's just that I'm moved by this. No one loves Malfoy, someone should. I'm greatful to you for writing this beautiful, thoughtful and amazing piece of work even if it will give me nightmares. But don't worry, I want these nightmares. Eye-opening ones they will be. I need fear for right now everything's too perfect. I've got sadness, lots of that, but no fear and if you don't have fear, you aren't human so thanks, I will think and think and sleep, but I won't have blood on my hands, never.

Paige Knorr

Reviewer: celestina blackDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49034Chapter: 1
i was lost
and then, i thoguht i had it.
and then i was lost again.
and then.
draco was on Our side after all.
oh god.
double agent. leading harry to voldemort so that harry could kill voldemort, that was the plan. and hermione didnt know.
oh god.
oh god.
oh, hermione.....

Reviewer: jessicaDate: 2003-08-25
Reviewid: 48540Chapter: 1
good. it is a bit depressing though, isn't?

Reviewer: QuiditchBeast24Date: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42632Chapter: 1
Pretty good storie, very sad but not bad. Although i found it a little hard to read because of the fact that first i couldnt see harry teaming up with draco. Two i couldnt see harry not telling hermione what there plan was, and third it really isnt in Hermione's character to kill someone with a sword. But i must say i liked the storie, thanks for the good read.

Reviewer: no oneDate: 2003-07-11
Reviewid: 41465Chapter: 1
it so sad :'(
























its so sad

Reviewer: 23Date: 2003-07-11
Reviewid: 41438Chapter: 1
Good

Reviewer: annaDate: 2003-07-02
Reviewid: 39701Chapter: 1
ok. so did hermione kill Draco. what happened in this story. i just don't get it.

Reviewer: narcissaDate: 2003-06-11
Reviewid: 36311Chapter: 1
*shudder* hermione ... wrong? now there's one good situation gone TOTALLY wrong

Reviewer: just meDate: 2003-04-15
Reviewid: 28034Chapter: 1
Wow.. that was.. deep. The was really angsty and I loved it all! I'll be looking for more from you!

Reviewer: ButtheadDate: 2003-01-16
Reviewid: 16374Chapter: 1
HI I AM ALONE AND THIS STORY IS MAKING ME PARINOIED!!!!!!

Reviewer: MARIAH aka CLUELESS!!!!Date: 2003-01-15
Reviewid: 16321Chapter: 1
I HAVE NO CLUE OF WHAT JUST HAPPENED! It was obviously well written because I did NOT get it. Could you please, pretty, please help me out and please sned me a summry using SMALL words? SORRY for my stupidity!

Reviewer: MariahDate: 2003-01-15
Reviewid: 16320Chapter: 1
I HAVE NO CLUE OF WHAT JUST HAPPENED! It was obviously well written because I did NOT

Reviewer: ButtheadDate: 2003-01-15
Reviewid: 16318Chapter: 1
I HAVE NO CLUE OF WHAT JUST HAPPENED!!!!!

Reviewer: RenDate: 2003-01-14
Reviewid: 16181Chapter: 1
Chilling.

Reviewer: LyssaDate: 2002-12-02
Reviewid: 10890Chapter: 1
OMG!! I actually cried cuz i thought harry died (got a bit of a crush hehehe) then OMG wow but then why the hufflepuff was harry laying there all cold and stuff if he was the one who had did the Killing curse? i am a lil confused please respond but i really liked it very well written :)

Reviewer: StormyfireDate: 2002-10-14
Reviewid: 6274Chapter: 1
That was so devestating, so brutal. Well-written though.

Reviewer: LizzyDate: 2002-08-25
Reviewid: 3050Chapter: 1
Oh my gosh! That was super! How did you do it? How did you think of it? Brilliant! BLOODY brilliant! Poor Moine! 2G2B4GTN! URCRE8V!

TTFN,
Lizzy

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