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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Ac, a.k.a Funky Norwegian Bunny Friend on ff.netDate: 2003-05-09
Reviewid: 31379Chapter: 1
This was so great!
I loved the way it just sort of flowed nicely. The relationships between them all was not strained or proclaimed "best buddies forever" or "perfect couple" but with a hint of something we already know mixed with lots of FABULOUSLY written original views.
And the first part was so lovely, and very (should I be so daring as to call it) marauderish. Motley. Like that word.
The best part was undoubtedly when the ancient question of how to write about the unevitable Sirius/serious puns was solved with James not being able to put his irritated feelings into words...
"That THING you do with your name!" HA! Priceless.
Please keep on writing, I love your other work too!
Especially James' first poem in that short fic with some magazine from the marauder era. (meant to do that...)
Hope to read more from you soon!
Snortles of uncontained laughter from your FNBF.

Reviewer: ll1970Date: 2003-01-19
Reviewid: 16842Chapter: 1
Oh, this wery sweet, and in character, and not stereotiyical! Please keep on!

Reviewer: KiaDate: 2002-09-26
Reviewid: 4780Chapter: 1
^_^ Wai!!! I like, Scribey! Hmmm... *tries to think of something origanal to say, have only just earlier ranted about short reviews.* Anou... anou... um... Well, i like they way you do Remus, it just really fits the way that i've always seen him. Gonbatte ne!

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2002-08-28
Reviewid: 3404Chapter: 1
This is full of lovely description and good characterization. I'm looking forward to the next part of this!

I enjoyed very much the way you described the forest.

Catherine

Reviewer: LeeDate: 2002-08-28
Reviewid: 3382Chapter: 1
Wow! You're really talented! Great plot, pacing, transitions and humor! You're true to the characters and yet add new life and originality to them. Looking forward to Part 2!

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2002-08-28
Reviewid: 3367Chapter: 1
I like this story! It explains how Lily got involved with the Marauders, and also shows some of the wonderful relationships between the friends.

I also like Sirius's hunch about James "getting kinda busy soon" *g*. Pretty perceptive of him!

I'll be looking forward to more of these!

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