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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Tongue-tied
Review(s): 30

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-01-17
Reviewid: 138664Chapter: 1
This I liked. Thanks.

Reviewer: Angeline WeasleyDate: 2005-04-11
Reviewid: 119260Chapter: 1
"Behind her she heard 'Hey, Fred! 'Ickle Ronniekins has a girlfriend, too!' followed closely by a double 'Shut up, George!'"
Ah, love this.
cheers.

Reviewer: MaryannDate: 2004-02-13
Reviewid: 70454Chapter: 1
Cute little ficlet, I enjoyed.

Reviewer: SehilaDate: 2003-12-09
Reviewid: 62717Chapter: 1
Hermione...
ok... i think u could have put more of a surprising ending in there but...
ok. it was ok.

Reviewer: AnastasiaDate: 2003-11-28
Reviewid: 61066Chapter: 1
I really enjoyed this short story! Well written and original, it was very good.

Reviewer: celestina marie blackDate: 2003-11-12
Reviewid: 59791Chapter: 1
AAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAH
this is funny as hell. and very accurate too. "hermione has a talk. ron has a word"
but, i dont think that mione would be so very forward with the "do you want a kiss too" bit. other than that....
whoo.

Reviewer: VeritaserumDate: 2003-09-30
Reviewid: 54858Chapter: 1
Hehehe, funny, I liked it!

Reviewer: dragontacDate: 2003-09-20
Reviewid: 53656Chapter: 1
lol!i was not expecting quite that.

Reviewer: katieDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53168Chapter: 1
LOL!!!!!!!!!! awesome *cute* very *cute* nice work

~ katie

Reviewer: MarissaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53163Chapter: 1
What was ron trying to tell her? That he likes herrrrrrrrrrrrrr?

Reviewer: RussaDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53096Chapter: 1
ROTFLMBO! That was GREAT! Keep up the funny stuff!

Reviewer: HannahDate: 2003-09-17
Reviewid: 53056Chapter: 1
Giggle!
Hermione...
God that girl can be surprisingly dense for someone so smart! I can't picture her saying that though, 'Do you want a kiss too?' She's just not that outgoing and up front unless she's wild at Ron.
Very good otherwise!

Reviewer: Miss ZippitydodahDate: 2003-07-02
Reviewid: 39802Chapter: 1
hehe. this story made me smile. I want now to read the rest of your stories!

Reviewer: Sweet StephanieDate: 2003-07-02
Reviewid: 39716Chapter: 1
PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE YOU STORY !!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mcily NochiDate: 2003-04-30
Reviewid: 30164Chapter: 1
This is amazingly cute! This is actually the first HP fanfic I've ever read (I write Star Wars fanfic), but a friend recommended it, and it was well worth reading. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: SuvielDate: 2003-03-09
Reviewid: 23450Chapter: 1
Aww, so sweet! I enjoyed this a lot. ^_^

Reviewer: kayjalDate: 2003-03-09
Reviewid: 23400Chapter: 1
hahaha
"Hermione"...
"hermione"....
"hermione"....
"Do you want a kiss, too, Ron?" Hermione asked, wearing her favorite "inquisitive" face.

"Well..." .
AWWWWW its so cute!!
hahhaha i am the biggest fan of R/H..long live !

Reviewer: MeenaksDate: 2003-02-12
Reviewid: 19953Chapter: 1
I liked this piece very much. It was in typical Herm-Ron style.. Good work.. Keep it up..

Reviewer: Lady NorbertDate: 2002-12-15
Reviewid: 12651Chapter: 1
Cute and sweet! Liked it much!

Reviewer: RugiDate: 2002-12-13
Reviewid: 12396Chapter: 1
This was so cute! I really liked Ron's broken-record helpless confusion. Very enjoyable!

Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2002-12-13
Reviewid: 12378Chapter: 1
Behind her she heard "Hey, Fred! 'Ickle Ronniekins has a girlfriend, too!" followed closely by a double "Shut up, George!" before she crossed the barrier into the Muggle world.

what a LUVly last line!

very cute.

~TPR

Reviewer: JennyDate: 2002-12-08
Reviewid: 11840Chapter: 1
What happens. You are a great writer, you should continu

Reviewer: AngelPrincessGinnyDate: 2002-12-07
Reviewid: 11713Chapter: 1
That was adorable!

Reviewer: Incurable RomanticDate: 2002-12-07
Reviewid: 11598Chapter: 1
Yay! This is awesome! I don't think I've read this one. "Focus on the conversation Hermione..."

Reviewer: Hermione @ HeartDate: 2002-12-06
Reviewid: 11560Chapter: 1
Aww, poor Ron. He's absolutely craving her affection...

Maybe the summer will sort them out! That was a great little bit of almost-fluff! Cute!

Reviewer: LourdesDate: 2002-12-06
Reviewid: 11441Chapter: 1
This is simply fantastic. Do write again.

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2002-12-06
Reviewid: 11415Chapter: 1
now, that was just confusing. i didnt understand a fricken word of this! what was ron gonna say when he kept sayin: "Hermione..." i dont UNDERSTAND this. tut, tut, tut, you shouldnt confuse people like that. tut, tut, tut. darn, have i been rambling all this time? whoops.

Reviewer: ToriDate: 2002-09-29
Reviewid: 4998Chapter: 1
This is very cute! I wonder what Ron was going to say, though...

Reviewer: GregoraDate: 2002-09-29
Reviewid: 4975Chapter: 1
This is really cute! Can i do a brit pick though?

^^^^"We should get Hagrid to write him, too, wherever he is. Sirius will..." ^^^^

In the UK, that should be this, instead --

^^^^"We should get Hagrid to write TO him, too, wherever he is. Sirius will..." ^^^^

Great little pice ^-^

Reviewer: pubDate: 2002-09-29
Reviewid: 4950Chapter: 1
What did Ron want to say? It's soo interesting.

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