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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 32

Reviewer: Pheonix FeathersDate: 2006-01-11
Reviewid: 138353Chapter: 1
I love this story, it is just how I had once felt and how it changed all of the sudden, well... there wernt any frecles or red hair, but that was pretty much it...

I also love the way you show her personality, it isjust perfect!

Congrats for your heart acking story...

:D
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Reviewer: FionaDate: 2005-08-08
Reviewid: 129370Chapter: 1
I LOVE IT!!!!
You should write more like those things...
They are just what a person like me, as if anybody cares, just ENJOYS with all the heart
Congrats...
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Reviewer: pDate: 2005-07-07
Reviewid: 126362Chapter: 1
ASOME
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Reviewer: samDate: 2005-06-11
Reviewid: 123714Chapter: 1
i like it when she dscribes Ron and how she couldn't love.
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Reviewer: LizzieAnnDate: 2005-04-08
Reviewid: 119011Chapter: 1
I really like this it is sooo true, and fun, good job!
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Reviewer: ellieDate: 2004-11-10
Reviewid: 104156Chapter: 1
CUTE, CUTE, CUTE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewer: FionaDate: 2004-09-22
Reviewid: 99044Chapter: 1
OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!! So simple, but ever so nice and fluffy, and very well writen!!!!! I simply loved it, but I don't know why!!!!!
Well, I loved it and I will never forget such a lovely and romantic story short but adorable!!!!!
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Reviewer: HannahDate: 2004-08-24
Reviewid: 98436Chapter: 1
I agree with you. I don;t believe in love either, But unlike you i will never love. I liked the story though, very interesting
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Reviewer: eliDate: 2004-05-13
Reviewid: 82484Chapter: 1
i love it!!!!!!really... i'm gonna print it & put it in my bedroom wall. :D
C.u.T.e.
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Reviewer: SarahDate: 2004-05-12
Reviewid: 82446Chapter: 1
That was so good. I really liked it! Everything that you said about love is true but then I guess if you happen to fall in love it all goes out the window. I wouldn't know. I've never bee in love. Anyway, very sweet fluffy story! I have to email it to my friend now!
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Reviewer: AllisonDate: 2003-12-21
Reviewid: 64247Chapter: 1
Cute and meaningful! And it makes total sense. I loved, and it my second time reading it......good job!
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Reviewer: SehilaDate: 2003-12-02
Reviewid: 61585Chapter: 1
cute. thats all i can say. it portrays hermione very well too.
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Reviewer: EstherDate: 2003-09-19
Reviewid: 53458Chapter: 1
Ooh! That was cute! I like how you portray the extremely rationale side of Hermione. And then of course show how not even that much rationality can stand in the way of love. :D
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Reviewer: lineDate: 2003-08-30
Reviewid: 49451Chapter: 1
oh.. write more.. NOW


loved it *sight*
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Reviewer: jDate: 2003-08-19
Reviewid: 47780Chapter: 1
cute
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Reviewer: LisalyDate: 2003-08-13
Reviewid: 46927Chapter: 1
OMG GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewer: meeshaDate: 2003-07-07
Reviewid: 40587Chapter: 1
that was an awesome beggingin!!! i love it!
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Reviewer: Sour CookiesDate: 2003-06-27
Reviewid: 38761Chapter: 1
Bloody brilliant! *Vaguely sounds like someone... *
Really, really cute!! You really got the mesure of Hermione with Ron!! Nice!
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Reviewer: HannahDate: 2003-06-25
Reviewid: 38485Chapter: 1
quite cute. :)
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Reviewer: Harry4meDate: 2003-04-05
Reviewid: 26467Chapter: 1
Very cute. All warm and fuzzy, and it sounds very Hermione-like. Scarily, it sounds like me too (apart from the part about falling in love with Ron! :) )

Nice piece.
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Reviewer: DinaDate: 2003-03-14
Reviewid: 23981Chapter: 1
This is a very smart and cute little fic. I love it.
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Reviewer: DavalynDate: 2003-01-20
Reviewid: 17001Chapter: 1
OMG, I absolutely loved that story, it made me go "awwww" and that's a very seldom thing for me. I hope you write more, I reall loved it. One of my faves.
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Reviewer: Miss ZippitydodahDate: 2002-12-24
Reviewid: 13820Chapter: 1
hehehe, so cute. love it, of course. anything r/h for me...
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Reviewer: trinaDate: 2002-11-23
Reviewid: 9969Chapter: 1
so sweet, ron and hermione. :-)
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Reviewer: Rachel GrangeDate: 2002-10-04
Reviewid: 5262Chapter: 1
That was so sweet! ^_^
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Reviewer: DrezDate: 2002-10-03
Reviewid: 5217Chapter: 1
I love it! Very Hermione-ish :) Absolutely perfect- she does seem the type to think that way, doesn't she? I mean, all practical, no 'love'...Props to you for getting here right!
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Reviewer: ToriDate: 2002-10-03
Reviewid: 5209Chapter: 1
OMG! YOu don't know how much I agree with this story, I mean how it's very Hermione-ish. It's very cute,and soooo true! And it's sweeter than anything! I loved it. *I'd now like to kiss the ground you walk on...* hehe, just kidding, but I'ts very cute, and what more can I say??? It's great. :-)
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Reviewer: Nico686Date: 2002-10-03
Reviewid: 5198Chapter: 1
AWWW! This one just make syou feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Luv it!
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Reviewer: annieDate: 2002-10-03
Reviewid: 5197Chapter: 1
Cute!! I love it. Half of this sounds exactly parroted out of my mouth :). A little thing your beta reader missed, though: Conceited is spelled as such, not conceded. Different word :). The ending is really nice, but I think it would have been neat to see Ron just hinted at the very end, really ironically. Really cute, though.
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Reviewer: Hermione @ HeartDate: 2002-10-03
Reviewid: 5194Chapter: 1
I actually said, "Oh my gosh!" and sighed out loud at the end. At first I imagined this being some insane story about a weiro-Hermione but this has to be the single sweetest, brief interlude with a character I've ever read. Oh, wow. The last line, it made my heart melt. No over fluff, or mushy kisses beyond what Hermione and Ron are ready for. Simple thoughts.
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Reviewer: GinnyWPotterDate: 2002-10-02
Reviewid: 5161Chapter: 1
Awwww. ^___^ Fluffedy. 'tis a good thing, I need cheering up...school's hell...
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Reviewer: AutumnDate: 2002-10-02
Reviewid: 5147Chapter: 1
Really cute! I love fluff!!! Short and sweet. I hope you keep writing!
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