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Review(s): 32
| Reviewer: Pheonix Feathers | Date: 2006-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 138353 | Chapter: 1 |
I love this story, it is just how I had once felt and how it changed all of the sudden, well... there wernt any frecles or red hair, but that was pretty much it...
I also love the way you show her personality, it isjust perfect!
Congrats for your heart acking story...
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| Reviewer: Fiona | Date: 2005-08-08 |
| Reviewid: 129370 | Chapter: 1 |
I LOVE IT!!!! You should write more like those things... They are just what a person like me, as if anybody cares, just ENJOYS with all the heart Congrats... |
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| Reviewer: Fiona | Date: 2004-09-22 |
| Reviewid: 99044 | Chapter: 1 |
OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!! So simple, but ever so nice and fluffy, and very well writen!!!!! I simply loved it, but I don't know why!!!!! Well, I loved it and I will never forget such a lovely and romantic story short but adorable!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Hannah | Date: 2004-08-24 |
| Reviewid: 98436 | Chapter: 1 |
| I agree with you. I don;t believe in love either, But unlike you i will never love. I liked the story though, very interesting |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2004-05-12 |
| Reviewid: 82446 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was so good. I really liked it! Everything that you said about love is true but then I guess if you happen to fall in love it all goes out the window. I wouldn't know. I've never bee in love. Anyway, very sweet fluffy story! I have to email it to my friend now! |
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| Reviewer: Allison | Date: 2003-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 64247 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute and meaningful! And it makes total sense. I loved, and it my second time reading it......good job! |
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| Reviewer: Esther | Date: 2003-09-19 |
| Reviewid: 53458 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooh! That was cute! I like how you portray the extremely rationale side of Hermione. And then of course show how not even that much rationality can stand in the way of love. :D |
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| Reviewer: Sour Cookies | Date: 2003-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 38761 | Chapter: 1 |
Bloody brilliant! *Vaguely sounds like someone... * Really, really cute!! You really got the mesure of Hermione with Ron!! Nice! |
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| Reviewer: Harry4me | Date: 2003-04-05 |
| Reviewid: 26467 | Chapter: 1 |
Very cute. All warm and fuzzy, and it sounds very Hermione-like. Scarily, it sounds like me too (apart from the part about falling in love with Ron! :) )
Nice piece. |
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| Reviewer: Davalyn | Date: 2003-01-20 |
| Reviewid: 17001 | Chapter: 1 |
| OMG, I absolutely loved that story, it made me go "awwww" and that's a very seldom thing for me. I hope you write more, I reall loved it. One of my faves. |
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| Reviewer: Drez | Date: 2002-10-03 |
| Reviewid: 5217 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it! Very Hermione-ish :) Absolutely perfect- she does seem the type to think that way, doesn't she? I mean, all practical, no 'love'...Props to you for getting here right! |
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| Reviewer: Tori | Date: 2002-10-03 |
| Reviewid: 5209 | Chapter: 1 |
| OMG! YOu don't know how much I agree with this story, I mean how it's very Hermione-ish. It's very cute,and soooo true! And it's sweeter than anything! I loved it. *I'd now like to kiss the ground you walk on...* hehe, just kidding, but I'ts very cute, and what more can I say??? It's great. :-) |
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| Reviewer: annie | Date: 2002-10-03 |
| Reviewid: 5197 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cute!! I love it. Half of this sounds exactly parroted out of my mouth :). A little thing your beta reader missed, though: Conceited is spelled as such, not conceded. Different word :). The ending is really nice, but I think it would have been neat to see Ron just hinted at the very end, really ironically. Really cute, though. |
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| Reviewer: Hermione @ Heart | Date: 2002-10-03 |
| Reviewid: 5194 | Chapter: 1 |
| I actually said, "Oh my gosh!" and sighed out loud at the end. At first I imagined this being some insane story about a weiro-Hermione but this has to be the single sweetest, brief interlude with a character I've ever read. Oh, wow. The last line, it made my heart melt. No over fluff, or mushy kisses beyond what Hermione and Ron are ready for. Simple thoughts. |
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| Reviewer: GinnyWPotter | Date: 2002-10-02 |
| Reviewid: 5161 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwww. ^___^ Fluffedy. 'tis a good thing, I need cheering up...school's hell... |
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