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Review(s): 24
| Reviewer: fizzjams | Date: 2006-03-12 |
| Reviewid: 140850 | Chapter: 1 |
| too kae believe type ov... not in character.. vry arbupt...and verry short sentences |
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| Reviewer: Pippin Carrson | Date: 2005-06-16 |
| Reviewid: 124177 | Chapter: 1 |
Holy Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!!!!!!! That was amazing!!! Please go on ...you write beautifully and I want more R/H fluff!!!!!!!!!!!
Toodles, Pippin Carrson |
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| Reviewer: Alesia | Date: 2005-03-29 |
| Reviewid: 118070 | Chapter: 1 |
Gred and Forge... speechless?!?!?!?! WOW!
Ok i'm done :) That was utter swote-ness:)
Alesia |
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| Reviewer: Christina | Date: 2004-07-31 |
| Reviewid: 94982 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story was great! i think i have already read this story but never reviewed!(sorry!!). I loved the part of rons christmas gift to hermione, that was really sweet! r/h romance rocks!! keep writing! thanks!!! |
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| Reviewer: Teresa | Date: 2004-07-16 |
| Reviewid: 92545 | Chapter: 1 |
| It was pretty good, but I didn't really get a sense for just how Ron and Hermione felt about each other BEFORE anything happened. I suppose that's just a personal preference, but I like to see a little unresolved sexual tension before we get down to the kissing. You didn't really discuss the character's feelings much and I suppose I would have liked to have more insight, not just plot. That being said, I did enjoy it and I hope to read more from you in the future! |
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| Reviewer: lise la magnifique | Date: 2002-10-04 |
| Reviewid: 5373 | Chapter: 1 |
| tres bien. i liked very much. keep up with writing, i wouldn't mind seeing this continued |
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| Reviewer: Maidenjedi | Date: 2002-10-04 |
| Reviewid: 5330 | Chapter: 1 |
| Yay, Tiffany! Still think this is an incredibly cute story, very glad to see you getting posted at the Quill! |
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