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Review(s): 17
| Reviewer: Lee | Date: 2003-09-08 |
| Reviewid: 51418 | Chapter: 1 |
How SWEET!!! thats really cute!! its creative, with the whole transfigure-robe thing. sweet!
-Lee |
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| Reviewer: UnicornMaiden | Date: 2003-08-15 |
| Reviewid: 47200 | Chapter: 1 |
| I thought it was going to end badly, but I was wrong! It was sweet. Nice job! |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione) | Date: 2003-07-26 |
| Reviewid: 43949 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear Author,
Thank you so much. This was perfect. Just like Ginny to come up with a plot to kiss him. Not so much like Harry to come out with the 'heart' statement. Might have been better if you had had him kiss her and THEN say that. Oh well. It was great. Look at me. I'm in such a hurry to write this so that I can go read other fics that I keep messing up. Of course I stop and take the time to correct them. Better go before I start saying something like your story is 'defect' rather than 'perfect'. LOL.
Paige Knorr |
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| Reviewer: googligoo | Date: 2003-04-09 |
| Reviewid: 27268 | Chapter: 1 |
the scenes whizz past too fast. u did not explain why harry kissed her.
it's like,
ginny accidentally kisses creevey, then harry just decides too kiss
ginny too. everyone is way off character[except for creevey] |
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| Reviewer: Arlene | Date: 2002-12-12 |
| Reviewid: 12337 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awwwwww!! So sweet! Greatly written! I like when Harry said "You also won something else, my heart." That was so sweeeeeet!!~Arlene |
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| Reviewer: trina | Date: 2002-11-22 |
| Reviewid: 9845 | Chapter: 1 |
| *sigh* such a good story... i really wish this was a movie, and i was ginny... lol. really creative! |
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| Reviewer: Jennlee | Date: 2002-10-27 |
| Reviewid: 7235 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awww. Nice story. It felt a bit rushed, but with a limit of 1500 words what can one do? I felt sort of bad for Colin, poor boy. |
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| Reviewer: Álan | Date: 2002-10-27 |
| Reviewid: 7231 | Chapter: 1 |
| You were evil I realy liked your story, why don´t you write another, but this time with more chapters? |
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