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Reviews for: The Letter
Review(s): 9

Reviewer: ameliaDate: 2006-02-11
Reviewid: 139646Chapter: 1
that was great, i loved the whole "golden snitch and seeker" idea, really cleaver.

Reviewer: NoraDate: 2005-06-22
Reviewid: 124839Chapter: 1
OMG! I loved what Ron said at the end to Harry. Great story!
And I really hate Malfoy.

Reviewer: EndicottDate: 2004-05-16
Reviewid: 82847Chapter: 1
very nice ah the fluff

Reviewer: Jo WickaninnishDate: 2004-03-02
Reviewid: 72894Chapter: 1
"I love you Hermione Granfer! And you make a very lobely Golden Snitch!"

AWWWWW!

That was a cute little story. I really liked it.

Reviewer: lineDate: 2003-08-30
Reviewid: 49502Chapter: 1
so funny and sweet *sigh*

Reviewer: narcissaDate: 2003-05-23
Reviewid: 33306Chapter: 1
lol, loved the last line!!!! ron definitely is a better seeker, he found the best wtich in the school. great work!

Reviewer: RikaDate: 2003-03-25
Reviewid: 25240Chapter: 1
Maybe a little cheesy, but still a cute little piece of fluff.

It seemed to be rushed at some points. Try to take your time more, so that the events of the story aren't speeding into one another. Also we didn't get a hole lot of Ron characterization, since he's key here, it might be a good idea to let us see a little more of his personality.

The original plot was a pretty good idea.

Reviewer: LauraDate: 2002-11-06
Reviewid: 8282Chapter: 1
Awww that was sooooooooo cute!!! I like the ending....it was really clever! Keep writing:)

Reviewer: EllenDate: 2002-11-03
Reviewid: 8069Chapter: 1
Awwwwww! "...you make a very lovely Golden Snitch!...I guess I'm a better Seeker than you are for once." Aaawwwwww again :) Too cute!!

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