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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 11

Reviewer: lemondrops8Date: 2006-08-07
Reviewid: 144669Chapter: 1
awwwww!! It was a great story! Im about to cry!!! (I loved it when Harry used his magic to make Dudley fall and throw up!) Please keep writing!

Reviewer: KayDate: 2006-01-19
Reviewid: 138711Chapter: 1
I really like this story. When Dumbledore says "Harry, I have been counting on that since the day I brought, I mean you, were brought here,” It seems a little out of character for him to fumble like that, but whatever, I still loved it. Depressing ending how Harry thinks the baby is lucky when the baby is him :( I loved it!:)

Reviewer: hey there delilahDate: 2005-11-29
Reviewid: 136540Chapter: 1
oh...how sad...
and...happy...
...or....
nevermind. i liked it.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-08-22
Reviewid: 130542Chapter: 1
Very nice. Thanks

Reviewer: nindeDate: 2004-02-16
Reviewid: 70947Chapter: 1
that was beautiful and so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Madeline ElsterDate: 2003-06-02
Reviewid: 35068Chapter: 1
Your fan fiction is decent (since I do not want to say "cute"; that is overused). The writing is a bit sloppy, and the POV shift in the paragraph beginning with "The wistful tone of Harry’s voice nearly brought tears to the older man’s eyes" is jarring. However, the characterization of Harry through his thoughts was done well and seems appropriate for a boy his age. :)

Reviewer: EmilyDate: 2003-05-03
Reviewid: 30468Chapter: 1
So sweet, and very in character. Loved the earwax line. ;)

Reviewer: AscafenielDate: 2003-03-27
Reviewid: 25440Chapter: 1
That was sweet. I loved it.

Reviewer: LourdesDate: 2003-01-14
Reviewid: 16167Chapter: 1
How very sweet. You know how to make me cry.

Reviewer: lilahpDate: 2002-11-05
Reviewid: 8198Chapter: 1
Poor little Harry. I almost cannot bear to think of him like this. Thanks.

Reviewer: BrendaDate: 2002-10-30
Reviewid: 7601Chapter: 1
love it....i want more. Isn't it time for another chapter. Don't keep your fans waiting. I need some early morning reading.

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