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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Kate LynnDate: 2003-08-17
Reviewid: 47432Chapter: 1
Oh, I really liked this. First, it's a great idea; Sir Nick isn't a character I normally think about, but when I saw this summary I was intrigued. Partially that was bc I never really thought of writing on him, but I'm glad you did.

Very well-expanded. It keeps with what little we know from canon and makes a fresh and fleshed out character. I love the bits you include, such as him being knighted. And Nathan Longbottom! Nice little touch, to put in the ancestors.

You also have a really nice style of writing. I wish the type was larger, but that's a technical thing, not related to your writing at all, which I thoroughly enjoyed.

Overall, great. 8-)

-Kate Lynn

Reviewer: Emma DalrympleDate: 2002-11-12
Reviewid: 8894Chapter: 1
We get to see how Nicholas is knighted *and* how he dies! I love seeing stories about minor characters, and this was well-written and imaginatively done. The ending is a treat—James and Frank’s ancestors!

Looking forward to reading any more minor character stories you might have up your sleeve :)

Reviewer: Natily JinDate: 2002-10-29
Reviewid: 7491Chapter: 1
LEAH!! THIS IS KIA!!This is one bloody hell of a good story. I'm not at all suprised that you won an award for it!!

Reviewer: pubDate: 2002-10-27
Reviewid: 7174Chapter: 1
I loved this story, especially "Thomas Potter" and "Nathan Longbottom" :)

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