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Author: Elanor Gamgee (Professors' Bookshelf)  Story: Watching Viktor  Chapter: Default
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Author's Note: This story was partially inspired by B Bennett's most excellent "Watching Harry" (and I do believe that now nearly every single one of her stories has inspired other fanfic--how awesome are you, B?). It also goes along with my own series, "Moody Slavic Man". This scene is from the middle of Moody Slavic Man, Chapter 7, from Ivan's point of view. It was in my head and wanted out, so I let it.

Viktor Krum and his world belong to J.K. Rowling. Ivan, Ilana, and Edina belong to me, but they are very happy to share Viktor's world.


Watching Viktor

by Elanor Gamgee

Ivan Pashnik gripped the ship's rail and leaned out further over the lake. The light of the lately-risen moon reflected all along the water, but he still couldn't see anything beneath the black surface. He sighed and pulled back to lean his elbows on the rail.

His eyes were drawn once more to the dark figure soaring through the air in the distance. "Sloth Grip Roll," he muttered to himself as the black shape turned over and hung from its broomstick momentarily, then rolled back over and sped off in another direction. Ivan shook his head. Viktor shouldn't be doing this to himself. But Ivan knew that no one, least of all little Ivan Pashnik, would be able to stop him.

Ivan himself had been out here for three solid hours, and he had no doubt that Viktor had been at it ever since he'd stormed out of the Great Hall at dinner. This was what Viktor did whenever he was upset or angry; he retreated into the solitude of the skies. Maybe others believed his story that he was getting in extra training when he did this, but Ivan knew him too well. He had seen Viktor do the same thing after the Vultures had lost to the Quiberon Quafflepunchers a few years ago; Ivan knew that Viktor had been furious with himself for failing to catch the Snitch.

But this was different. He had never seen Viktor show any interest in a girl before-in fact, he himself had often teased Viktor about that very fact. And Viktor had seemed to be making up for lost time this year, if his utter distraction at every single meal had been any indication. So it was no wonder that Witch Weekly article had come as such a blow.

Ivan and Edina had both followed Viktor from the Great Hall after he had read it. He had told them to leave him alone, so they had gone back to Slytherin table in confusion. It had been Edina who had snatched the magazine angrily from the pug-faced girl's hand, giving her a nasty look that stopped her laughing, for the moment at least. Ivan had loved her for that.

The two of them had bent over the magazine and read it quickly, and it soon became apparent what had sent Viktor stalking from the Hall. Ivan had looked over to the Gryffindor table and seen the girl-Hermione-laughing and talking with her friends. And his heart had sunk for his friend.

So he hadn't been the least bit surprised to see the dark shape in the distance, moving against the sunset, as he had returned to the Durmstrang ship that evening. Viktor hadn't even gone to the Quidditch pitch, but instead was soaring out above the lake and the Forbidden Forest, seemingly not caring who saw him. Ivan knew that this, more than anything else, betrayed how upset Viktor must be. Viktor valued his privacy above all else. It had always been that way, even before he'd become famous. When Ivan had first met Viktor, he'd been quiet and reserved, and ridiculously shy. Ivan had tried to draw him out over the years, and he liked to think that he had succeeded, somewhat.

When Ivan had first entered Durmstrang Institute, he had already known many of his classmates. Most of them were children of his father's friends. Ivan hadn't understood at that time what that meant-what the mysterious secret was that everyone in his family seemed to know, but no one would talk about. It hadn't been until his sister Ilana had finally explained it to him, at age fifteen, that he understood what the secret meetings were about, or who the strange men were who would occasionally come and sit behind closed doors in his father's study, talking in booming voices full of words that he didn't understand, and then departing quickly, always at night. It hadn't been until then that he'd understood the meaning behind his mother's pursed lips and tight expression whenever his father boasted proudly that his children attended Durmstrang Institute.

Ilana herself had already graduated by that time, so apparently she had felt safe in revealing the truth to him. She was four years older than Ivan, and had found an apprentice position in Hungary for a well-respected apothecary. Ilana had always loved potion making. Ivan grinned to himself as he remembered her jealousy when he'd written to her that he now had Severus Snape for Potions class. She'd sent him an entire letter telling him how undeserving he was, and then had ended it with "I miss you terribly! Love, Ilana." That was his sister.

He wished she were here now. Maybe she would be able to tell him how to improve things for his friend, because other than sitting out on the cold deck all night and making sure Viktor didn't drown himself, Ivan had no ideas. Ilana was a good source for questions of love-she'd written him reams of advice about Edina, which he'd followed, more or less-and she'd had more boyfriends than he could count. That was, of course, he thought proudly, because she too possessed the natural Pashnik charm and good looks.

Ilana had met Viktor, of course, back when she herself had been a student, and her words about him came back to Ivan now as he raised his head and watched Viktor execute a perfect dive above the lake. "He reminds me of Uncle Anatoly," she'd said, giving Ivan a thoughtful look, "Sort of…serious and sad." Ivan hadn't thought much about it at the time; after all, he'd only been 4 years old when their uncle had been killed, mixed up in-whatever their father had been involved in. Ivan didn't like to think about it, even now. But he had vague recollections of the man who had been his favorite uncle, once upon a time. He remembered grave blue eyes, and a thick brown beard, and a face that rarely smiled. He could no more explain why this man had been his favorite uncle than he could explain why Viktor Krum was his best friend. Edina had asked him many times why he bothered with Viktor, when Viktor so often made it clear that he just wanted Ivan to go away. Perhaps what he had answered in jest to Edina was true-maybe he did like a challenge. Or maybe he just felt that Viktor needed him, and, in some odd way, he needed Viktor.

"He's still up there?" came a soft voice behind Ivan, making him jump. He turned to see Edina, wrapped in her thick fur cloak and looking worriedly up at the sky.

Ivan smiled in spite of his worry. Seeing Edina always had that effect on him, no matter what the situation. "Yes," he said, following her gaze. "He hasn't been down at all."

Edina came to stand beside him at the rail. She pulled her cloak tighter around her, and they stood there in silence for a moment.

"Do you think it was true?"

The question may have seemed abrupt, but Ivan knew what she meant. He loved the way they could pick up a conversation they had left off hours ago, as if there had been no interruption. "I don't know," he said honestly.

"She does seem to spend a lot of her time with Harry Potter."

Ivan nodded. "I know," he said, "If it is true, I'm not surprised he's so upset."

"Do you think he knew before?"

Ivan raised his eyebrows at her. "Look at him. Do you think so?"

Edina sighed and leaned her elbows on the rail. "No, I suppose not. I guess it was a shock for him." She paused. "She seemed so nice, though, at the Yule Ball."

Ivan took her hand in his. "I know. I didn't think she'd be the type to do something like this, even if she didn't like him."

Edina squeezed his hand, but her eyes were on the sky above. "Poor Viktor," she sighed. She turned to Ivan, and a strand of her hair blew across her face in the breeze. Ivan tucked it behind her ear and put his arms around her waist, pulling her close and suddenly feeling very pleased and grateful that he knew she was his. She buried her face in his neck, and he could feel her breath stirring on his skin. He couldn't imagine ever being without this.

"You should go in," he murmured after a few minutes. "You'll freeze out here."

"And you won't?" she said with a smile, lifting her head and looking at him.

"No, I'm fine. Someone needs to make sure he doesn't do anything stupid. Well, more stupid, anyway," he said, nodding his head in the direction of the dark shape in the distance.

Edina nodded. "You're a good friend, Ivan Pashnik," she whispered, "whether he realizes it or not. He's lucky to have you. And so am I." She leaned forward and kissed him lightly on the nose.

"Of course you're lucky," said Ivan swaggeringly, to cover the warm flush of pride and pleasure he felt at her words. "You both are, and I am just glad one of you realizes it." He nodded decisively. Edina smiled at him, and Ivan smiled back, knowing that she could see right through him and not minding one bit. He pulled her into a breathless kiss, and for a moment, forgot everything else.

"Go on in," he said softly, when their lips had parted at last. "Stay warm." He leaned forward and kissed her gently on the forehead.

"You too," she said, squeezing his hands. "I'll see you in the morning."

Ivan watched as she went back in, then turned his attention once more to the figure above, now executing a perfect Plimpton Pass. He looked at his watch. "Four hours and still going," he muttered, now truly starting to worry that Viktor might injure himself. But what could he do, besides watch from the sidelines, and maybe make a joke or two about the situation in the morning? That was his role, after all. That was what being Viktor Krum's best friend entailed, and, until that changed, Ivan would do it the best way he knew how.


The End


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